Li Yi did make an appointment with You Ningsheng.
Mainly talking about the script.
Because "Mom Love Me Again" is always a work from the last century.
Li Yi completely reproduced the content of the original work before.
But during this period of time, he thought repeatedly, and still felt that the sword of the previous dynasty could kill the officials of this dynasty?
Therefore, he always felt that some things were inappropriate, but he didn't have much idea of how to change them.
For this reason, he specially made an appointment with You Ningsheng, a gold medal screenwriter, to have tea with him, hoping that You Ningsheng, a great screenwriter, could give him some advice.
Li Yi has a lot of weight, and he is very knowledgeable. If some memories and thoughts from the past life did not pop up from time to time, and simply speaking of his screenwriting skills, he would not be able to keep up with an old screenwriter like You Ningsheng.
Or Li Kee Tea Restaurant!
After ordering a few refreshments, the two started chatting while eating.
"Uncle You, please take a look. I feel that the scene I designed, in which the mother was initially reluctant and then later willing to drive the found son back, is a bit out of place. But if I change it, I am not sure.
." Li Yi looked at You Ningsheng and humbly asked for advice.
"Let's first analyze your story. In your story, there are two pairs of mother and son.
Lin Mu and Lin Guorong, Huang Qiuxia and Xiaoqiang.
In my opinion, your story can actually be said to be a testimony of how traditional culture incorporates a "person" into its rules step by step."
You Ningsheng began to analyze.
Li Yi nodded.
This is why Li Yi feels that although he is not worried about emotional resonance, the details of the plot are a bit inconsistent in this era.
"I think the most touching part of your story is the warm time between Huang Qiuxia and her children, and the most tearful part is the separation between Huang Qiuxia and her children.
Huang Qiuxia does not want her children to become orphans like herself. In ancient China, "orphan" refers to a person who has lost his father.
Huang Qiuxia did not know who her father was since she was a child, and was raised by her mother. She died of illness three years before she and Lin Guorong were discussing marriage.
But Huang Qiuxia still believes that her orphan is obviously following the ancient Chinese definition of "orphan".
Huang Qiuxia's years of raising her children actually simulated her original family model. The reasons why Huang Qiuxia returned the children to the Lin family seemed to be: she did not want the children to have no father like herself; she considered the future of the children; and because Lin's father understood
He has overcome his own pain, but fundamentally it is still the traditional concept that is at work.
Because she didn't realize that a mother is indispensable for her children, and having a strong and independent mother like her who can provide her children with emotional dependence is what her children need most.
What children want is not a wealthy home, but rich and abundant love. Even if there is no wealth, only a life accompanied by love can form a complete personality.
I think these are the areas where this story and your plot arrangement are somewhat inconsistent with this era.
Because the biggest difference between humans and animals is that the most valuable product of human evolution to the stage of modern civilization is human love. People who are satisfied with the company of love will be very happy now and in the future. Huang Qiuxia still has a tragic definition of happiness.
The tradition remained consistent. Because Lin's father understood her pain, he gave her fatherly care. Although this care was pitiful and superficial, it could still touch her heart, and she finally decided to return the child to the Lin family." You Ningsheng has obviously done a lot of work, otherwise, he would never have said these words easily.
This made Li Yi quite touched.
"In my opinion, the way Huang Qiuxia separates from her children is to persuade and teach her children to be "obedient"! This is exactly the obedience in our traditional culture. To be a good child, you must first listen to your parents! The second is to be simple and rude
, when the child ran back crying and hugged Qiuxia, she cruelly pushed her son away and taught her son to go back and kneel down to admit his mistakes and to be filial to his grandparents. She cut off the child's emotional needs and turned them into the orthodox concept of filial piety. The third is
Lie and deceive, "If you come back to find mom, mom will hide." As a result, the child sneaks back again but dare not enter the house. Think about it, how many parents use these three tactics to deal with their children?! They do not pay attention to their children.
The emotional needs of the child are not protected, and the fragile mind of the child is not protected, and the child is not given the greatest sense of security. Instead, he blindly teaches the child with traditional concepts that have no respect for the individual's heart, causing the child to grow up before he has spent a childhood full of exploration without any taboos.
, a young man who has not yet experienced unbridled independent growth has matured."
"In my opinion, these points may be the biggest problem with your story, because in this era, there may be such people, but they are definitely not the mainstream thinking." You Ningsheng continued his analysis.
"Even if your original intention is to show that a mother "thinks about her children", so she reluctantly does it, but it is a bit too much. In other words, such reasons are somewhat untenable in our era!" Li Yipo suddenly became enlightened.
"Yes, but if you want to modify it, how should you change it?" Li Yi asked with some distress.
"You are asking the wrong person about this. The so-called art comes from life. You should probably ask those mothers what kind of reasons would make a mother prefer to separate from her children. Yes, it is for the benefit of the children, but this requires a process.
I think the biggest problem with your story is that it lacks such a process, but don’t ask me how to arrange it specifically, I don’t know much about it,” You Ningsheng said with a smile.
Li Yi nodded.
In fact, he also thinks that Huang Qiuxia's separation method in the story may be okay, but the reason for the separation, or in other words, a mother will definitely not be willing to separate from her child at the beginning, but why is she willing later? She even takes the initiative.
Got it?
This requires a process, that is, it requires a reason, but this reason needs to be shown, through some things and some encounters.
And this is the change Li Yi wants to make now.
After returning home, the first person Li Yi looked for was naturally his mother.
Yi Lingling was naturally extremely happy to learn that her son wanted to learn from her.
Just when Li Yi asked the first question, Yi Lingling couldn't help but frown.
"Mom, I mean, if, if you were Huang Qiuxia, for what reason would you actively choose to give your child to the Lin family?" Li Yi asked.
Yi Lingling glared at Li Yi.
"I mean what if! After all, mom, you are also a mother." Li Yi said with a smile.
"You're asking the wrong person. Our family's situation is completely different from Huang Qiuxia's, right? But I think it's just that what the Lin family can give, she can't give. For example, educational resources, in the countryside, Xiaoqiang can't accept anything at all.
The best education, or something in life that made Huang Qiuxia feel that she could not give it to her children no matter how hard she tried..."
