Late Night Essays - By the way, a few charming authors in the text
Let me start by apologizing to everyone.
There was an omission in the previous chapter, mainly due to the confusion of those who wanted to make up for the defense... According to the resumes of these military commanders in the imperial camp, basically only Xin Xingzong is qualified to be a defense envoy, and everyone else, including Wang De
None of them are enough... The main reason is that my work and rest have been reversed these past few days. When I started writing, my mind was confused, and I actually made Yaojun and Military Attaché 53 two different things. In fact, they are very related... I want to apologize to everyone,
It has been modified.
But this mistake is too ridiculous, it is one of the worst mistakes, so I would like to specially apologize to everyone.
Speaking of which, yesterday a famous author who was planning to write about the Southern Song Dynasty asked me, apart from the dictionary of the official system of the Song Dynasty, what else can help people understand the official system of the Song Dynasty? His brain hurts from reading the dictionary... I said you found it, share it with me
After a while, I also had a headache.
Back to the topic.
By the way, since the epidemic, my parents have been trapped in the small one-bedroom apartment I rented in Beijing. They were planning to leave after the Chinese New Year, but they still can’t see the hope of leaving. It was fine in the first few days, but now both parties
They are all a little irritable, and whoever looks at it is not pleasing to the eye... In this case, the two parties have a great influence on each other, and I happened to upload a new book, and then started working remotely these days, so it is obviously a bit difficult, and my schedule has been even worse in the past few days.
It was upside down, the fatigue was revealed, and there were some obvious low-end errors and omissions when coding.
Putting aside this flaw and looking back, I feel that my recent writing has been squeezed by life and has lost its charm.
What is the charm of words... To be honest, unlike many big guys who speak clearly and clearly from the first word, I am not good at summarizing by nature. I basically just open the document and just write blindly.
But this time, maybe because I reviewed another episode of "Hyogo" late at night, I rarely had some extra insights, so I'd like to share them with you.
The charm of words certainly includes many things.
But for online novels, the first thing is naturally the excellent plot and characters... A good story and outstanding characters are the foundation of a novel. If the story is well written and the characters are well established, it doesn’t matter what the subject matter or type is.
Regardless of the messy golden chapters or obscure themes, they will naturally stand out.
If the plot of a book is wonderful, it is wonderful, and if the characters are lovable, it is lovable. If you add one more thing, it can be said that a book is well written.
This is the kingly way, and it is what determines the basic height of a book, so there is no need to say more.
The plot and characters are very interesting later on, so I’ll just talk about them here in no particular order...such as the theme.
The theme of online articles, due to the need for a sense of substitution, may mostly be about individual growth and strength, but this does not mean that something that the author wants to express cannot be put into this seemingly lacking tone. This thing may even be unconscious.
But because of the special relationship between the text and the author, it finally emerged in the entire work.
It's like many people ridicule "Fights Break the Sphere" and think it is so low-end, but in fact, in my opinion, Dang Tuo uses millions of words to describe "Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Don't bully young people who are poor."
'After this sentence, which seems to be a bit vulgar now, has been properly rendered, this book has its ideological value... For junior high school students and high school students, this thing will never go out of style.
You are no longer a high school student and have matured, but there is no need to look down on the immature high school student now, because that is who you once were.
Therefore, the book Doupo has its own outstanding ideas, and it is extremely royal.
Then let me talk about my own book "The Overthrow of the Han". To be honest, based on my experience and experience in the previous Korean entertainment novel, I was shocked to achieve that result... I was completely in a daze... and then I also
I've thought about it, why is it so highly praised beyond my expectation? It's obviously so pretentious at the end, the plot is obviously crappy, and the plot gets out of control several times in the middle.
After thinking about it, the thing that I am most satisfied with is that I maintained respect for a considerable number of historical figures in "The Overthrow of the Han".
When it comes to this, some people must be unhappy because he killed Lu Bu, so he didn't respect him... But in fact, I always think that this is also a kind of respect, just like Cao Cao's death, Sun Jian's death, Liu Bei's death.
First of all, we must make sure that death is also a kind of respect, and the author's respect for a character is not the same as the character's respect for the character in the plot. The two have nothing to do with each other.
The author respects a character, especially a character with a historical prototype, not by asking you to support him and give him a good ending, but by combining his actions in the film with his historical image and giving him the ending he deserves.
There are results... So first of all, you must understand that Cao Cao, Sun Jian, Liu Bei, Lu Bu, and even Zhou Yu, those who have ambitions and have damnable reasons, die, it is a kind of respect for their past life.
There is no complicated position between two attributes like Zhang Fei, so it is an insult to force certain characters to survive!
Specifically, Cao Cao is the character closest to the protagonist in terms of political height. He has complete thoughts and clear ambitions. When he realizes the reality at the end of the road, it is time to stand up straight and die!
Sun Jian was originally in chaos, but because the protagonist changed the ideological form of the entire world and made him realize that his actions were immoral and even inferior, then he should struggle to die!
Liu Bei is the little brother of the protagonist, an ambitious man and a knight-errant of Yan and Zhao. As a prince, his actions are worthy of the people he leads, so he should have no regrets and carry them with him.
A hint of rebellion and cooperation, just like a wanderer dying when he confronts his family!
In the end, Liu Bei was in Han Dang's arms. Isn't it the behavior of a rebellious child who went out to make a living?
As for Lu Bu, I admit that this method of feces killing is beyond the sanity of some readers, but if I rewrite it, I will still let him die in the toilet, and then give him a jar of wine at most and let him drown in the wine. The so-called
Live in a drunken dream and die in a dream, leaving a legacy of stink for eternity.
This ordinary hero should die like an ordinary person. This has nothing to do with his interests with the protagonist. His character and historical image do not deserve a higher-end death method.
It's a bit like self-justification as I talk...
Coming back to my thoughts, regarding things like "The Overthrow of Han", someone on Zhihu mentioned a "sense of compassion" for history. At the same time, someone else said that I have a "bitter" sense of humor about history. I think
In fact, it's the same thing...it's all respect, compassion should be compassionate, and bitterness should be bitter. They are all respect for history, and there is no conflict.
So try your best to respect history and historical figures as much as possible (of course your ability is extremely limited and prone to mistakes), which is probably a simple idea in the history of "The Overthrow of the Han".
In addition to the somewhat suspenseful thoughts, there are other things that are easier to understand...such as the atmosphere.
The so-called atmosphere, everyone must understand that the apocalypse has the cruelty of the apocalypse, cyberpunk has the absurdity of dystopia, history has the weight of history, the city must keep up with the sense of the times, and what the alien continent needs is the burst of imagination.
Xianxia has a sense of elegance, and also displays regional characteristics, etc... Here is a point in particular. I have always believed that the mortal stream that occupies half of Xianxia is not actually the so-called Xianxia. It is a kind of dystopia.
The Orientalization of cyberpunk...it's just a family opinion, don't pay attention to it.
Since history is mentioned here, I especially want to praise and recommend Qiyue, the author of Qiyue Xinfan. Qiuyue’s background in a major is a great advantage. His books have a unique sense of historical depth.
It needs to be shaped through some deliberate words.
In comparison, the craftsmanship in my text is too obvious... For example, in order to highlight the sense of the late Han Dynasty in the last book, I kept using other people. Many people were annoyed by it, but I couldn't help it. I really
My hard level is limited, my vocabulary is too small, I don’t use this, I don’t know how to write, this book is also an official one, but... However, it’s easy to teach everyone, some of them may be changed, I will change it if you tell me
, but some are limited by basic abilities and want to change but are unable to.
I also want to raise my hand and write as if a god is knocking on the door, but I really don’t have this ability.
Let me talk about one more thing, Ji Cha... The atmosphere is not so precise according to the starting point classification. Some classification starting points are not dare to be divided. Ji Cha's female character is unique... Looking at other things, you will feel that the meaty scene is abrupt and absurd.
But here in Ji Cha, as you read it, you will wonder why it is so strict now and does not allow the author to have a fiery meat show to sublimate these two people?
So besides characters, stories, ideas, and atmosphere, what else is there?
There is also sensory stimulation... There is no need to hide this, and there is no need to say too much. It is natural that words can stimulate the senses.
What about after sensory stimulation?
What about all of these? Pure words are like a white cloth for painting... Can just words show a certain charm?
I think it's also possible.
Just like the animation "Hyogo", I admire it very much, but if you ask me to say what is particularly outstanding about it, I can't tell you, or I am too lazy to introduce those things... because I like "Hyogo", I like it.
This animation is as plain as water and as clear as clouds, and it feels like it is flowing like clouds and flowing water.
Do you realize it?
Plain water and pure clouds flow like clouds and flowing water, giving people a sense of enjoyment.
So how do you make words flow smoothly?
The first is the exquisite structure.
In a well-structured article, dialogue between characters, description of the environment, popular science, and commentary, these things should be perfectly combined...
Then there is the rich vocabulary.
Finally, the sentence structure is well-proportioned, neither biased nor abnormal, and the words are precise without missing anything.
In short, achieving these three points will definitely not make readers feel irritated and boring. Building plots, describing characters, and mixing thoughts in this kind of text is an enjoyable process.
Moreover, this kind of writing can ensure the lower limit of your writing during the trance period and the fatigue period... In the state of daily updating, the quality of Internet articles will inevitably vary.
And here we continue to recommend two people - Young Woman Bai and Haidilao, who will turn white while sleeping, and Undersea Walker. From my personal point of view, I feel that the writing of these two people is extremely brilliant.
Of course, the character creation, plot tension, and atmosphere of the era and region of these two people are all great... But I praise them here just because I feel the charm of their writing, so I recommend it here.
Finally, I am thinking about why I like "Bingguo" so much and then recommend these authors... The reason is very simple. Their things are what I long for. It is precisely because I can't do this and I long for these things. , so I appreciate it very much.
It's dawn, it's time to go to bed, good night everyone... I wish I can get enough sleep, and I wish you are in high spirits.
I couldn't sleep after I finished typing, so I wrote my essay late at night, wherever I thought of it. You can just take a look at it. There is no need to go into detail this time.