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I watched "The Dragon King's Work!" all night last night and I didn't write. The Nine-Headed Dragon Bayi is awesome! You can win more for free!
Is this a hot-blooded boy show? I love it.
I haven’t written at all, so I’m taking a day off to sort out my next thoughts. As we all know, this book is coming to an end. It is expected to be completed by the end of this year. There are still some things to write, not so soon, but it’s getting there.
At the end of the day.
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1. Regarding Fulgen’s battle to defend Kostantiniya, I originally wanted to write with reference to the Battle of Sarhu, that is, no matter how many enemies came, I would only go all the way and defeat three armies in succession, but later I considered
Let Mortarion join. The Death Guard Legion master is best at judging the war situation and choosing the right time to attack, but his weakness lies in being overly cautious and hesitant to do big things. Seeing small gains and forgetting the original purpose, so it was finally written.
so.
Second, the journey to Ulthuan originally had some additional plots later on, such as the war between the dark elves and the high elves in the north, and also included further battles between Lane and Fulgrim and the undead pirates and the Witch King Malekith, but obviously this
One of the reasons for this plot is that the protagonist is not sufficiently involved, and the other is that the readers are not very interested, so in the end it ends a bit hastily.
Third, in the same way, Tomb Kings should also have a whole plot of their own. I originally thought about it a lot. As we all know, Tomb Kings are a very unpopular bench camp. If I were to write it, many people would probably guess it if I didn’t write about the background in detail.
The story was confusing, and the detailed description of the background was also suspected of being filled with water, so in the end, the plot of the Tomb Kings was reduced as much as possible, and only a small part of Khalida was written.
Fourth, the chapters that were originally planned to be written after visiting Dulong City, Ryan took the opportunity to continue north to inspect the Chaos Wasteland with Lilith and Morgiana were also deleted. It was unnecessary and they were all described.
Fifth, this book has two regrets. The first regret is that the relationship between several characters in the opening is not handled well. The first one is the wandering knight Ike. In fact, Ryan was a knight of the kingdom at the time, and Ike was essentially the same person.
"People within the system", it is inconvenient for him to break up with Ike. On the one hand, he takes into account his reputation. On the other hand, this kind of wandering knight is of noble origin, which also means problems with connections and getting along with his colleagues in the future. However, I did not have any problems with readers.
By making it clear, it seemed that Ryan was afraid of getting into trouble and therefore gave in.
six.
The second regret is the issue of character design. As we all know, the character Teresa received a lot of criticism at the beginning. I have always wanted to write a character design of a tsundere warlock lady, but on the one hand, I lacked experience, and on the other hand, I lacked writing skills.
The question is, only write "Ao" but not "Jiao", then
This kind of character is no longer likable, and readers can’t see the real person’s appearance from three perspectives, so the writing is not good. To be honest here, ladies like Yennefer and Bayonetta
, if you couldn’t see the face, I’m afraid most readers wouldn’t have a good impression of it.
In the same way, Orika is the one with the most distinctive personality, the strongest sense of presence, and the most likable character.
In the same way, as the first heroine (laughs), Sulia's character has never been established, resulting in a weak sense of existence. I later used a lot of writing power to barely establish her status as the main palace. What a failure! As for
The reason is related to item 7 below.
Seven, my original writing plan included a plot in which the protagonist, after arriving in Baator, would have a solo adventure as the Holy Grail and solve various problems for the common people. This plot was the best way to establish the character of Sulia, but unfortunately due to pacing issues
Due to the reader's preference, I became a baron immediately in the end, but it is difficult to write this after entering the lord mode.
8. As mentioned before, only four heroines were originally designed, namely the knight Ji Sulia, the imperial baroness Emilia, the sorceress Theresa and the dark elf maid Orika, but the latter one was not planned.
Zhou, the second reason is the greedy nature of men, and the third reason is the reader's trend, which led to the addition of several female protagonists. As a result, the plan was broken.
There was not enough pen and ink, and many problems arose. For example, Teresa's role was taken away by Veronica and divided between Aurora, such as Sulia's role was squeezed out of Sylvia's, and such as Morgiana's role was squeezed out.
The scenes of Surya were squeezed out, and the Lady of the Lake squeezed out the scenes of Morgiana, one by one, and the scenes of other characters were also squeezed out.
9. Due to the outline problem and the writing being too long, some of the female protagonist story lines that I had compiled in advance have been written, so I thought about adding one or two female protagonists in the later stage. At that time, I also made a very detailed character design.
The prototype is a famous anime heroine from KyoAni, and another prototype is a real-life character who became famous because of a video. However, considering that the book is about to be completed, it will be abandoned in the end, but you don’t have to worry, next time
You will see them appear in this book.
10. Regarding the plot of 40K, I deliberately weakened it in the later period. The first is that too many scoldings and criticisms made me extremely irritable. The second is that the overly ambitious plot of 40K greatly affects the main plot. Furthermore, the complex character of the original body
It is very difficult to write about each person's characteristics. I often have to read the official documents over and over again.
The novel and reading the comments of various bosses to figure out and study the characters make it very laborious and time-consuming to write. For example, it is easy to write a lot about the originals with distinctive personalities such as Angron, Guilliman, and Russ, but by the time
Complex and profound primarchs like Jonson, Fulgrim, and Sanguinius are very difficult to read thoroughly and very tiring to write.
In the same way, writing 40k stuff is also very tiring. If it is too restorative, you will be scolded for copying it. If it is too reductive, there is no need to say what the ending is.
What’s even more funny is that some people will use their own third, fourth or fifth design to criticize my second design after reading other big guys’ interpretations of it.
Brother, they are no longer the same thing at all, they are not related to each other anymore.
But the content of 40K will also be written in the future. After all, this is the chessboard where the emperor and the evil god are wrestling, and it is already entering the endgame.
11. I originally planned to write a short story of about ten chapters. It was about the God of War, Devon Hill, and his old uncle Angron, who went on an adventure to the ancient ruins of Albien. The uncle and nephew worked together to solve the story.
Obien's ancient secret, but for the same reason, this plot was too long and affected the rhythm of the writing, so it was eventually canceled from the plan.
Twelve, the fatigue in the middle and late stages has also tortured me very much. If I didn’t have to finish writing ET, I really want the ending. Some of the plots later have always had small flaws. Maybe many people didn’t notice it.
, but I still want to apologize.
Thirteen, all bookings come with benefits, everyone will understand.
Fourteen, the next book is already being conceived. It will generally still have this typical Western fantasy style and background, but I will add a little bit of Eastern elements. This time I must have a good character design and outline, and I will not make the same mistakes as before.
Therefore, I will take a (longer) break after writing.
Finally, the emperor is here to say thank you, and I ask all readers to accompany this book on its final journey.