Post a single chapter to talk about the struggles in writing the next book and give me a slap in the face.
PS: I would like to recommend "The Pirate Flag Flying". This book is a rare nautical farming novel that combines firearms and magic in a low-magic world. It is quite interesting. I am recommending it in Sanjiang. You can check it out to see if it suits your taste.
I read the comments in the book review area every day, and basically reply to them. I fought some people in Longkong for 300 rounds about this before, so some people in Longkong seemed to be unhappy with me, laugh, of course I
I didn't mind. Later I learned to be smart and stopped arguing. I just secretly read the posts that criticized me. It was actually quite interesting. I would read every post that criticized me several times.
Although those posts are basically people who gave up the book before reading the 100,000 words, but they did read it after all, right? I am not a RMB person, so I cannot be liked by everyone. I have to admit that because I am a novice, I wrote this book at the beginning.
It's very bad. It's almost the same as the online game novels from 10 years ago. It's also a bit like Legend. Although I haven't played Legend myself and it didn't improve until it was over 200,000 words long. But some of the criticisms are indeed correct. Good is good, bad is bad.
It's just not good, there's nothing to deny it.
The games in this book are essentially still online games designed from the player's perspective, not from the game designer's perspective. It's hard to say how reasonable it is, because I'm the only one working on this, and I have to balance the work of the novel.
Regarding the coolness and the balance of the game itself, I feel that the whole starting point of this work is just a fool like me, and it is actually normal if I don't do it well.
My book is actually not very flattering. I wanted to write something more realistic and attract more book friends. In order to make the book more YY, I did give the protagonist two cheats that completely destroyed the rationality, such as the Mushroom King and
The human mutation skills, and even the [Lonely Charge] have destroyed the balance to a certain extent, and the reduction in team experience is not realistic. It is completely imposed to allow the protagonist to lead in the early levels. It is reasonable.
It’s hard to say, at most it’s logically self-consistent and relatively rigorous.
But to tell you my psychological truth, this book is not originally about rebirth. If I don’t give it a cheat, no one will read it.
If you insist on comparing this book with real-life games, there’s really nothing to say. After all, it’s a novel written by me alone.
But for some major balance issues, I have always adhered to the bottom line. For example, there is no unique skill or profession. Taking the bloodline that the protagonist is working hard for recently, I want to arrange a strong bloodline for the protagonist, but I don’t want others to have the same bloodline.
If I can get it, then I can only increase the difficulty of getting this bloodline, instead of blocking other players' way.
The more difficult this bloodline mission becomes, the more logical and self-consistent it is to get the super-powerful bloodline.
There are friends in the book review section who want to write more interesting books. What should I say?
I am in the late stage of paranoia. The power system in this book has a very strict setting. I don’t want to use reverse cheats to weaken the protagonist later in the book. Strong is strong and will not fall behind without any reason. Now the level
Whenever I was caught up, I gave very appropriate and logical reasons.
For example, in the recent chapters, the comparison between the strength of the NPC and the protagonist is shown. The protagonist is very strong, but only among players, and cannot be compared with the NPC. It is impossible to arrange his personal strength to violently torture Napoleon and his commanding ability just to make the writing more enjoyable.
The plot of crushing Napoleon will make it impossible to write the rest of the article.
The key NPCs in history should be consistent with their personalities as much as possible. They will not be bowed to at first glance, nor can they get close to each other with just a few words. So I also want to write it in a fun way, but if I don’t have a sense of propriety, it will be easy.
The writing collapsed.
Also, let’s face it, these days, novels really come from real life. A troll in Longkong posted a post saying that my book is so rubbish and yet people are recommending it. He checked the data and found out that he only paid over 300 yuan for a subscription.
It turns out that the eyes of the masses are sharp.
This guy is really an idiot. He didn’t know that there was something wrong with the subscription data statistics of Qidian Data. The average subscription statistics only counted up to April 18 this year, and the data was still much higher than the actual data. I remember I was
Anyone who is over 200 yuan on April 18th can book it.
But now it is September. If the starting point data can still be checked, the average subscription of my book should be more than 900, because my average subscription is more than 700. My book has not received many recommendations, but the data has always been
The collection is steadily increasing, with just over 8,000 collected. There are still 1,000 that I have collected from friends in previous game groups. The actual collection is over 7,000. The collection ratio of 10:1 is actually very satisfactory to me in the game category.
And my collection is growing very steadily. It can steadily increase by 10 to 20 pieces a day without recommendations. For a novel on the shelves, this data is still acceptable.
Some people don't like it, but some people like it. It's not a good habit to represent others if you like it.