I thought about it for a long time before I decided to say these words.
Some readers in the comment area said that my novel has deviated from the elf literature and felt that the elves in the novel are more like tools.
Some people think I wrote a suspense novel.
Because this is my first time writing a novel, I don’t know much about the various genres of dianniang, so I don’t know what my own style is.
Let’s give a unified answer.
On December 12, a book friend said in the comment area that the realistic elf novels would make book friends unbearable.
At this time, I had finished the first plot line and knew clearly that I had to start a light-hearted and humorous plot.
Because in the elf world, you can fight against darkness, but through the process of fighting, readers must see beautiful things.
A friend of mine once said when discussing the plot of the novel with me that the light blooming in the darkness is the most impactful. So I have been expressing the most beautiful things in the most straightforward way while the main plot is progressing.
The gift from parents corresponds to Oleander's abandoned childhood. Two words run through it, father's love and mother's love. The words Oleander said here directly correspond to her emotions when she found the diary.
The emotional outburst of the negotiation with Qi Lan showed the warmest strength Luther received along the way.
So after the big conflict with Qi Lan and the meeting with the Interpol inspector, you can see that my writing style returned to the daily rhythm again.
That is, on the first day back to my daily routine, the comment I mentioned earlier appeared.
Because I basically had no manuscript at this time, I began to seriously consider the opinions of my book friends, so I speeded up the time when the second main plot conflict appeared.
In fact, if you look at the first half of Chapters 114-119, you will find that I have spent a lot of words on the interaction between humans and elves, and elves and humans.
But my book friend once again told me that the rhythm of the plot that I am currently interspersing with the interaction between elves is completely over the top.
So I speeded up the conflict again. I can clearly say that the character of Evergreen did not appear so soon. In my conception, he at least came out after the protagonist and the existing elves have been running in for a period of time and grown to a certain stage.
Explosive foreshadowing.
I deleted at least 40,000 words of the preliminary draft and revised the outline of the branch plot and the main plot.
Those of you who have never written a novel may not know that a major plot advance means that all the things you have conceived will be overthrown, and all the foreshadowing you have laid before will probably collapse directly.
But you are readers, and I have changed it to meet your needs.
This is also why my update word count has been ups and downs in the past week or two. In addition to company affairs, there is also the fact that I am currently revising the manuscript.
But I'm desperate. After I made the changes, my comments tonight and yesterday made me feel helpless.
Indeed, they are affirming that I write well, which I am very happy about, but what I see is that what they say is not unreasonable, and the audience may really deviate from the elf fandom readership group.
I thought about it for a long time and really didn't know how to make a decision.
If possible, please tell me the book friends who are still reading it. I will make improvements directly after finishing the role of Dieffenbachia.
For the rest, I would like to thank the book friends who are still subscribing.
To be honest, my initial order was less than 60, which is very, very bleak data.
There should be quite a few authors who skipped writing this data, but I just can’t bear to part with these book friends who spent money on this book.
I remember a book friend whose tail number was 3375. When I only had less than 100,000 words, he praised me for my good writing and kept voting for me. Another person who contributed a lot to my early recommendation votes is the only one in the comment area now.
Essence speech book friend tfvgub.
This tfvgub book friend was the first to give me suggestions. I am very grateful to him.
I was very satisfied after he made the comment about feeling sorry for Oleander, because it meant that the characters I portrayed had been recognized by book friends. This sense of accomplishment is rare and can make the author addicted.
There is a book friend named Wu Cheng on QQ. One day, she suddenly told me that she would give me all her recommendation votes, um, 8 votes.
I thought he was joking at the time, but later I actually saw her giving me tickets backstage every day.
A book friend named Jiuxi posts posts on my bleak articles basically every day. In fact, I’m also curious why no one posts on my books. Maybe it’s because I don’t have enough writing skills and I really don’t want to complain and interact.
There is also the boss yu2003 who keeps giving rewards. After checking the fan value, it seems that he has subscribed throughout the whole process.
There is also a group of book friends who subscribe silently without saying a word, supporting my first 60 subscriptions.
Thank you very much. I wanted to say these words on the day it was released, but I have been so busy recently that I feel dizzy. I stayed up late tonight to say all these words.