489 Tears Are More Unforgettable Than Laughter (2/2)
"How can this be like this? They all get better in the exam, and then go to the school they want to go to together, and go to the city they want to go to together. Isn't this good?" Yang Ruoyi, like the readers who followed the update, wanted her mother to modify it uncomfortably.
The direction of the plot.
"This is definitely good! But if so, will the plot be too bland? Comparing the two, which one do you think has a stronger story? If it is made into a short film, which one is better?" Su Xuexuan said with a smile.
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"It's better to watch if they are not in the same city. The teacher said that "Romeo and Juliet" and "Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai" are so classic because they all have bad endings, and tragedies can arouse the audience's emotions more.
Sympathy and tears are better remembered than laughter!" Tang Wenfei said a very philosophical thing she heard from her teacher.
"It's indeed the one you said is prettier, Mom." Yang Ruoyi thought about it carefully, and although she was still a little reluctant, she still admitted the fact.
"However, you can still fall in love even if you are not in the same city! Nowadays, the Internet is so developed that mobile phones can make calls and WeChat video chats. If that doesn't work, you can go there and meet by buying a ticket! Is it possible to have a long-distance relationship?
"In the end, Peng Xueyuan still prefers the Shuangwen-style plot direction.
“Long-distance relationships are so difficult!”
"Unrealistic!"
"Yes, we can't meet each other often. Any minor conflicts will be magnified many times!"
"The main thing about falling in love is that don't two people need to be together? They often go on dates and so on. Since we are not together from the beginning, we can't date. How can we cultivate a relationship?"
"It's so hard to run around. Even when we're catching up with announcements, we feel tired from flying! Not everyone can fly every day."
"There are indeed people who persist in long-distance relationships, but in fact they are still very few."
Peng Xueyuan's idea was questioned and opposed by his two friends. After all, compared to Peng Xueyuan, they have more contact with society and reality, and they cannot be as naive as children who believe in fairy tales!
Especially Yang Ruoyi, when she was recording "Longing for Life" last year, she heard Teacher Kang Yao discuss with her parents the problem of artists finding partners. One of them was the breakdown of their relationship due to work separation and not being able to be together often.
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If you get married or have children, problems will arise due to long distances, let alone falling in love!
Listening to their heated arguments, Peng Xueyuan scratched his head, not knowing how to respond.
"Actually, Peng Peng's suggestion is good. It is indeed possible that they had a good impression of each other and tried to get together even though they were in different universities, but in the end they separated due to very practical reasons. But here I think it is
There's no need to shoot it, you can tell it in one stroke, or use very few shots to quickly explain their ups and downs in their relationship." Su Xuexuan laughed, "Because we are a micro-movie, and if you make the plot too complicated, it won't be able to fit in it.
, and it doesn’t highlight the theme of high school time.”
Su Xuexuan's words were still very "authoritative". Peng Xueyuan and the two girls nodded together.
"The ending is finally here. I think it's best to have a correspondence between the ending and the beginning. For example, we started with Hao Shuai dressed neatly and handsomely in a suit pushing open the hotel door, but the camera cuts to their high school days, back to us
At the very beginning of the story, and then at the end, although Hao Shuai was dressed handsomely, he opened the door and attended Chen Wenwen's wedding with someone else." When Su Xuexuan said this, she saw three people who couldn't bear it.
expression.
"Isn't this too cruel?" Peng Xueyuan said angrily, "It's going to add insult to injury!"
He kind of put himself into Hao Shuai's role. He always felt that Hao Shuai's ending would be his own. In the future, he would have to watch the girls he liked walk into the wedding hall one by one, and the groom would not be him...
It's too awful!
"I feel like the audience will scold us to death if we shoot like this!" Yang Ruoyi felt a little sad.
"The color of this tragedy is too strong. I feel like our micro-movie is a little too heavy?" Although Tang Wenfei felt that tragedy would create a classic, she felt at the time that she couldn't torture Hao Shuai all the time. It was really too cruel.
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"This micro-movie is about the beauty of youth and how we should cherish our time in high school. I want to pair it with a song for Yiyi to sing, and everyone will be moved by this story." Su Xuexuan laughed.
He said, "Of course, if you think it's too cruel, you can add an easter egg at the end, after singing, where we will shoot a second ending and let Hao Shuai become the man accompanying Chen Wenwen in her wedding dress."
"It's good to shoot the second ending. If that's the case, I also like the easter eggs!" Peng Xueyuan said happily.
"Mom, what song is it?" Yang Ruoyi couldn't help but ask after hearing the information that she was more interested in.
"This song is called "Those Years"." Su Xuexuan took out the lyrics she had written.
"Auntie, so fast? You have already written the song!" Tang Wenfei asked in surprise.
"Yesterday, I actually had a little inspiration after listening to Yiyi's description, and then I wrote it down. This song is actually quite suitable for our story. Do you want to listen to me sing it briefly?" Su Xuexuan smiled.
said.
"Yes, yes!" Yang Ruoyi clapped excitedly, "Mom's singing is also super nice!"
Tang Wenfei and Peng Xueyuan also clapped together and looked at Su Xuexuan expectantly.
There was no accompaniment, and Su Xuexuan had no intention of going downstairs to play the piano. While playing and singing, she simply sang a cappella:
"Back to the original starting point,
In the memory of your green face,
Finally, we have arrived at this day."
Su Xuexuan's voice is very gentle. When she sings this song, it doesn't sound as sad as the original one. Instead, it seems like she was telling the story just now, as if she is slowly telling the story in front of Yang Ruoyi and the others.
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"Old photos under the table mat,
Countless memory links,
Today the boy is going to the girl’s last date.”
While listening, Yang Ruoyi looked at the lyrics in her hand and couldn't help but shake her head slightly, feeling very intoxicated.
Mom sang beautifully, and the girl felt like she was being sweetened by her mother's slightly nasal singing, which was so gentle and warm!
"Back to the original starting point,
Standing blankly in front of the mirror,
Clumsily knotted red tie,
Comb your hair into an adult look,
Put on a handsome suit,
You will definitely be more beautiful than I imagined when I see you later..."
Hearing this, Peng Xueyuan couldn't help but turned around and said to Tang Wenfei: "It tastes like that!"
"Shh, don't talk!" Tang Wenfei glanced at him and said angrily.
How can you interrupt such a beautiful song casually?
Peng Xueyuan scratched his head and sat back angrily.