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Double the monthly pass, and the plot

The starting point is really confusing. I just asked for tickets two days ago, and the next day I learned that there are double monthly tickets for the end of this month and the beginning of next month...

It feels like a head-on blow, a heavy punch...

Please tell me if the starting point can be reminded at the beginning of the month to see if it is doubled...

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As for the plot just now, hey, let me post an introduction that I used before.

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My name is Lin Qi, I am 21 years old. I have only one partner, who is the captain of the Shichibukai "Kujo Xuren". I am the only crew member of the JOJO Pirates. I have to practice until 8pm every day.

I don’t smoke, and I only drink lightly. I go to bed at any time in the evening and sleep until I wake up naturally. But before going to bed, I must drink a cup of the captain’s special flower milk tea, and then do 20 minutes of eight punch meditation...

I, Lynch, have been labeled as a so-called pirate by others. When fighting, I will strike very hard, and some people are lying in the hospital without coming out. After I taught the navy who is not good at it and likes to put on airs, they don't dare to cause trouble again.

;The food in the restaurant is not worth the price, so I dare not pay... But! Even if I am like this, I will never allow others to take away my partner! Katakuri, your next sentence is——

Katakuri: "Your next sentence is 'Old man, your substitute is the most useless'... What does this mean?"

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In fact, it is the story of a guy with the ability to stand in the world of One Piece...

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This is an old introduction I wrote when I started the book, but I didn’t use it directly. Later I wrote a million words and used it for a while, and now I’ve changed it back. I just want to say that up to now, this book has been based on

Don't worry about following the outline. I didn't just write whatever I thought of...

Of course, the outline is relatively simple. The first sentence is "Robin was robbed, Lynch went to save it."

But now that I have written this, my mentality has changed.

First of all, I don’t want Sister Robin to become someone who needs to be saved by Lynch.

The same bridge section can also be written in different ways

I will consider which way of writing looks better.

Someone asked again, wouldn’t you delete this paragraph?

Good question

This is the shortcoming of a relatively complete outline. If I delete and change it randomly, I won’t know how to write it later...

Anyway, it’s a novel, just listen to the breakdown next time

PS: One Piece’s thunder and lightning can’t kill anyone, everyone should know that, right?! Σ(°△ °)


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