When the finale came to an end, I felt so much reluctance.
There are many, many characters in this book, each one of which was created by my hands. It’s like living in that world, and I can’t bear to see them end.
But the story has come to an end here.
At the beginning, the book had two main lines, the Taoist line and the daily line.
Originally, I planned to write these two lines at the same time, but the author was too young and lacked writing skills to control it.
In the Penglai Stream story, the Taoist line ended hastily.
After the end of this line, the line of the heroine Da婍 comes again. When it is completely decrypted, the story of this book will be over.
[To be honest, I have been using Yeguo to read and catch up on books recently. I can switch sources and read aloud with many sounds. www. Android and Apple are available.]
I made several fatal mistakes during the writing process.
It's just that the characterization is too thin.
Especially the fairy boy, I used a lot of strokes to write about this person, but he was easily killed by the protagonist.
The second villain has no foreshadowing and appears very abruptly.
Another fatal shortcoming is:
Readers said they like to read daily life, but later I tended to write about daily life. If I wrote too much about daily life, the plot would advance too slowly. If I read too much about daily life, I would easily get fatigued and lose the ability to follow through.
In the final analysis, I just didn't grasp this degree well.
I must learn from this lesson in the next book.
Fortunately, the completion of this book is still acceptable. The holes that need to be filled have been filled in, and the things that need to be written have been written.
Try to write better in the next one.
Thank you brothers for your support!
Finished scattering flowers!
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