This book is indeed unsatisfactory. The reasons have been mentioned before and I will not repeat them here.
However, this book has given me a lot of benefits.
The biggest gain is that it magnified the flaws in my writing to the point where I can no longer ignore them...
In fact, I believe that every person who writes a book has a sense of arrogance in his heart and thinks that the book he writes is good.
Although it is not the best, it is at least a good grass.
This is normal, and it is not entirely due to subjective factors. It is more that what you write is often more in line with your own outlook on life and values, or it can also be said to be your way of thinking.
Therefore, it is easy to ignore one's shortcomings when writing, until one day I look back... and find that even I am not satisfied.
After discovering the problem, there was a time when I didn’t want to finish the article, although I could finish it soon.
At that time, I felt that it didn’t make much sense to summarize the article hastily.
Thinking about it later, I thought it was just a practice of pen writing... It's the kind of writing that is written for feelings with basically no royalties. Therefore, the visual feeling will be stronger in the subsequent chapters.
If I summarize this book, I think it is because as a writer, I think too fast, too hastily, and too hastily. The pictures in my mind are only reflected in the text as an outline, so what I think of,
What you see and understand cannot be reproduced in the reader's mind.
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Doesn’t a successful writer make readers resonate with him?
If you can't do it, it's not good enough.
The new book has learned the lessons of this book and pays more attention to the characters' personalities, multi-perspective descriptions and detailed descriptions.
When writing a new book, I often slow myself down, remind myself to walk slower, and think about whether readers can see what I see and think what I think.
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