After thinking and hesitating for two months, I finally made a decision. I will stop updating the book "Infinite Base of All Heavens" after completing this plot. In other words, after finishing the game of Torch City
Stop updating after that. As for the chapter about the expedition to Texas and snatching Tacitus, I will decide whether to write it or not depending on the situation.
Because in fact, the book "Infinite Base" has more than 1.3 million words as of now. But I really can't stand the level of display. Compared with "The Mechanic", the setback can be said to be all-round.
In fact, this book was very bumpy from the beginning. The initial version was unable to grasp the rhythm and no one paid attention to it. Later, I rewrote the first 30 chapters to give this book the capital to continue writing.
In fact, I am very satisfied with the "Resident Evil" chapter of this book, both in terms of character portrayal and plot setting. The "Fallout 4" chapter is actually above the passing line.
But the real problem is the "Command and Conquer" chapter, which is the main content.
Basically, in the chapters of "Command and Conquer", the characters are written with no characteristics and no personality. Yiyi was almost written as a robot, Lin Huo, as a mage, turned out to be a complainer, and others include Luo Cheng, Wang Jinsong, Lu Weiwei and other characters
None of them showed their own personalities, they were all just tool men. The only one who stood out was Duan Heshan, who was also a villain.
Compared with the distinctive characters such as Kristina, Shi Mingdong, Jane, and Zhang Ruijun in "The Mechanic", I can't even find the highlights of the characters in "Infinite Base".
Moreover, there are also problems with the plot layout of this chapter. The plot advances too slowly, there is too little description of Nod and GDI, and the protagonist does not fully participate in it, as if he is an outsider. The result is that the story moves here and there, but never grasps the key points.
This result really makes me very disappointed, because I think my level should not be like this. After the baptism and training of nearly 6 million words of "The Mechanic", I hand over such an answer sheet. I don't want to say whether I am sorry to the readers.
, I even feel sorry for myself.
What makes me particularly uncomfortable is the group of readers who are supporting me through "Infinite Base". But the more this happens, the more frightened I feel. Because sometimes I can't tell whether they are supporting me or supporting this.
book.
I really don’t want to set a precedent for eunuchs. I have been writing this book on and off for a year now, and I feel unwilling to give up like this. But I can only make this decision because I don’t have the confidence to say that this book
It will be better in the future.
Therefore, in the end, I can only say sorry to my friends who have been supporting me, and I am truly sorry. I am sorry for your support for the standard of this book, and I am also sorry for your support for my regression.
Next, after this book comes to an end, I will answer all your questions about the plot and settings. Friends who have questions about the plot development and basic settings will be able to get answers.
Then I will revise "The Mechanic" again to see if it can be unblocked. If it still doesn't work, I need to calm down and reflect, and then continue to create with my heart and write a new work.
Thank you all for your support...I am sorry for you...