Chapter 23 A good composition should be read to everyone
But at least Chen Wenxing did not correct Li Yi in the Chinese subject, which made Li Yi very happy. His essay question cost one thousand system coins, and if he was only given ten points, he would certainly feel very much at a loss.
So, Li Yi called out the system teacher and wanted to ask what happened to his grades.
"system interface!"
"System teacher!"
A holographic screen soon appeared in front of Li Yi, and the system teacher stood in front of Li Yi with a smile. This time, the system teacher changed into a red suit, looking young and enthusiastic.
Originally, Li Yi wanted to ask the system if it had deceived him! But when he saw the pretty face of the system teacher, his anger immediately disappeared.
"Host, what's the matter? It seems it's not time for the exam!" It seems that the system teacher also knows everything. When she came out, she actually talked to Li Yi first.
"Teacher, I'm sorry, I want to ask, is the answer you gave me must be 100% correct?" Li Yi asked the system teacher carefully.
The system teacher was smiling like a flower. But when he heard Li Yi's words, his face immediately darkened.
"What do you mean, you doubt the ability of our system teacher." The system teacher was obviously not happy after hearing what Li Yi said.
"No - no, I'm just asking casually." Li Yi didn't dare to talk about his grades. Because he hadn't seen the math and English papers yet, how could he be sure that the answers he bought for these two subjects were wrong.
"Let me tell you, our system teachers are far superior to those of any of your well-known universities on earth. Let alone middle school questions like yours, even college questions, we have them all at hand, and it is impossible for you not to be able to do them. You guys
In my opinion, middle school questions are not worth mentioning at all. The ability of teachers in our system to answer questions is far beyond your imagination."
When the system teacher saw that Li Yi doubted her ability, she immediately became unhappy. She directly told Li Yi that the answer she gave was 100% correct and there could be no mistakes.
As soon as Li Yi heard what the system teacher said, he could only believe him. After all, these systems that travel through time and space are all researched by super civilizations. The level of their civilization is far above that of earth civilization. As far as earth civilization is concerned, the test
This question is just a child's play for others, so how could they do it wrong?
"Teacher System, I'm sorry, it was just my imagination. I'm sorry. I will never doubt your ability again in the future." After hearing Teacher System's words, Li Yi quickly apologized to others.
"Okay, don't call me if you have nothing to do next, I'm busy!" After the system teacher said that, he disappeared in the blink of an eye. Then the system interface in front of Li Yi also disappeared.
"Hey, me too, how can you doubt the ability of the system teacher? You are really stupid and asking for trouble." Li Yi is now sure that it is not the system's problem. The answer he gave is 100% correct.
"Then what's the problem? Are my grades obviously wrong?" Li Yi was still thinking about this.
After Chen Wenxing finished handing out the papers, he returned to the podium.
"Students, I have also handed out the papers, and everyone has seen their scores. In this Chinese language test, the most important thing is the essay question. This big question accounts for more than one-third of the total score.
Therefore, learning Chinese is mainly about practicing your writing skills. Only by improving your composition scores can you achieve good results in the Chinese subject.
This time, the highest score in Chinese in our class was by Liu Xiaoyun, who scored 122 points. Her composition score was 58 points, ranking second in the class.
As you can see, her composition score accounts for almost half of the total score. In other words, in the Chinese subject, if she wants to improve her grades, she can only rely on composition.
Speaking of this, I have to say that Li Yi, a student in our class, also scored very good in Chinese this time. He scored 91 points. He was the fifteenth in the class. This result is very good.
The reason why Li Yi was able to do so well in the exam is because he wrote very well in his essay. This time he scored 59 points, one point shy of a perfect score. He was first in the class. And his total score was only 91 points.
.After such calculation, we know that Li Yi only scored 32 points for the Chinese knowledge question. This is a very small score. Li Yi's composition score already accounted for two-thirds of his total score.
From the scores of these two students, it is not difficult to see that the quality of your Chinese score depends on the quality of your composition score. As long as your composition score is good, your Chinese score will not be too bad.
On the contrary, if you are not good at writing essays, your Chinese language scores will not be much better no matter how well you do. No matter how well you study the previous knowledge questions, it will be difficult to get full marks. Those who can score 70 or 80 points are already
Very good.
Calculated this way, in the Chinese language test, if you don’t write well in your essay, your overall score will not be much higher. But if you write your essay well, your overall score will definitely not be bad.
Just like classmate Li Yi, he is the best example of what I said.
This time, classmate Li Yi’s composition also opened my eyes. I have never seen such a good composition. Today, I will let classmate Li Yi read his composition to everyone. A good composition is
Read it to everyone so that everyone can learn something useful from it."
After Chen Wenxing said this, Li Yi was stunned for a moment. He had never been treated like this before. He was really embarrassed to read his own composition in front of the whole class today.
And Liu Xiaoyun felt a little jealous. You know, this treatment was hers before. Her compositions have always been the best in the class. Her compositions are often read to everyone in the class.
But today is different. Her composition is no longer the best, but Li Yi's composition is the best.
This, of course, made Liu Xiaoyun a little uncomfortable. She looked back at Li Yi, feeling very unconvinced.
"Hmph, let's see how good your composition can be. It's not because Teacher Chen is looking at you this time to raise your composition score." Liu Xiaoyun didn't believe that Li Yi could write a composition that was better than hers.
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However, since he had such an opportunity to perform, Li Yi would not give up. He stood up with the paper and started reading.
Li Yi deliberately read his composition in a melodious voice. He read it very seriously and it was very realistic. The whole class looked surprised when they heard Li Yi's composition. After all,
Li Yi's composition is indeed very good, far above that of other students.
"Papa! Papa! ---" After listening to Li Yi's composition, everyone couldn't help but start applauding.
"It's so well written. This guy's writing skills have improved so quickly."
"No, they are far above us. We really can't compare with them."
"It seems that I have to learn from classmate Li Yi. I admire his writing skills."
"I also want to have a good relationship with classmate Li Yi and ask for more advice from him."
When the students heard Li Yi's composition, they were all impressed and wanted to learn from him.
Only Liu Xiaoyun still looked unconvinced.
"Hmph, aren't you just one point ahead of me? What's so great about this, this kind of argumentative essay topic is originally suitable for boys to write. Next time if it's not an argumentative essay topic, I'll see if you can surpass me."
Liu Xiaoyun listened to Li Yi's composition and felt that it was very good. But she also felt that her writing was also good, but she was still not convinced.
After Li Yi finished reading, he sat down.
At this time, Chen Wenxing looked at everyone again and said: "Just now, classmate Li Yi read his composition, and everyone listened to it, and felt that it was very good. In fact, this composition of classmate Li Yi could have won
Full marks. Because there is nothing wrong with her. The handwriting is neat, there is not a single typo in the whole article, the sentences are smooth, well-founded and coherent. I can't find any fault with her at all.
There is no precedent for giving full marks to the essay question. Even in the college entrance examination, you are not allowed to give full marks to a certain student's essay. You will still have to deduct two points.
Therefore, it is reasonable that I did not give full marks to Li Yi’s essay this time. I hope Li Yi can understand the reason why I did this.’
Li Yi didn't care about this score at first. After all, there is only one point! It doesn't matter even if you don't get a perfect score. This is just a small test, not a college entrance examination. In fact, even if it is a college entrance examination, you can't necessarily think that you should get this essay.
Full marks!
Essay writing is a soft power question, and there is no fixed answer. Everything depends on the teacher's own feelings. If people think you write well, then you have written well. If others think you wrote poorly, then you have nothing to say.
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Of course, some superficial things are also common to any marking teacher. Just look at the appearance of the essay. Just imagine an essay. If the handwriting is sloppy and there are many typos, it doesn’t matter what your content is.
No matter how well you write, you can't get high scores.
On the contrary, even if the content of an essay is not very good, but the handwriting is very neat and there is not a single typo in the entire essay, then the marking teacher will give you some preferential points after reading it.
Li Yi's composition almost covers both aspects. Even giving full marks to his composition is not an exaggeration. However, Chen Wenxing was unwilling to set this precedent, so he did not give full marks to Li Yi's composition.
After Chen Wenxing explained Li Yi's score, he also gave an explanation for Liu Xiaoyun's score.
"The reason why Liu Xiaoyun's composition was scored 58 is because there was a typo in her composition. One point was deducted. The reason why the one point was deducted was 58. This is also because when the essay was graded, it was actually based on 59.
Full marks." Chen Wenxing looked at Liu Xiaoyun again and said.
After hearing what Chen Wenxing said, Liu Xiaoyun naturally had nothing to say. After all, it was normal for her to score fifty-eight points in her essay. She had achieved such results before.