It is rare for someone to comment on the spring (transfer from the commentary essay forum)
[Reposted from the book review forum, author: 414788] ps: I said I was cheating on clicks. It is now 4:38. When there are the fewest people, I just want to collect the text of my book, regardless of praise or criticism, and I have taken the time to comment on the text of my book and share it with others.
reader.
Tell me about the books you have read recently. Select some good ones (limited to the public version)
Main poster:[414788]2006-3-1123:29:47Reply to edit
Respondent on Floor 109:[414788]2006-3-1817:43:06Reply to the editor
Both vulgar and extraordinary, how to grasp it?——
"Spring Guanggush"
I read this book by chance. I had never read Lai Da’s book before because the title was very vulgar. After reading it, I found out that Lai Dakaixin MJ had written this book. I liked the title and collected it.
A pirated copy of this book came out some time ago, so I borrowed it easily.
It's still very vulgar, familiar characters, familiar scenes, dialogues, abilities, everything is still the classic formula of the urban YY novel that has become vulgar, but it has a different flavor when you look at it. Let's talk about it in detail.
The beginning of the story is very simple. Zhujiao met a stunning beauty (see the stunning beauty again) on the bus, and then rescued her, struck up a conversation, etc. OK, what did you think of when you saw this?
Then Zhujiao woke up from the dream and realized that it was just a dream. As a result, the same scene as the dream actually happened on the second day, which led to the old story of Zhujiao. Therefore, I won’t go into the following plot development.
Starting to show his talents, dealing with beauties. At this point, everyone may have a general understanding of this book. This is the way it comes and goes, but after all, Lai Da has written 2 complete books of pornography. In his
Under the arrangements of
When I wrote a post about Hengxing before, I said that in fact, the same thing written in the hands of different people will give people absolutely different feelings. It is not about who is filming the MP, but what is important here is one - intensity.
The arrangement of the article, the grasp of plot movements, etc. can also be said to be the warmth, which reflects all aspects of a writer. Take this book as an example, the author gave the pig horn a super power but set it in a suitable
Scope, this is nothing, many novels also do this, but the author tries his best to give a reasonable explanation for what Pig Horn does within this scope. How should I say, the degree is very well controlled, and it is very fake.
It's too cowardly and very artificial, and it can't smoothly express Zhujiao's bastard spirit (MS doesn't have it). Let all the plot moves be under Zhujiao's control as much as possible. It's reasonable and well-founded, and it won't be written.
Because there is a problem with the positioning of the pig horns in the front but there is no room for challenge in everything at the back. This is the classic method of upgrading pig horns.
The women in the book, the author has written very ambiguously so far. Except for the iron-clad female pig horn, the others maintain a detached attitude. It seems that there is room for development or there may be nothing, which makes some novices (not in a derogatory sense)
) has always been on my mind. I checked it out in the book review area and found that there are higher voices calling for a one-size-fits-all approach, which I admire very much.
In fact, I don’t know if the book is good or bad. It’s okay to write such an article in the impetuous style of the starting point. I checked the update speed and it’s very good. Friends of Mi Shu who like reading can check it out.
Of course, there are a lot of problems, such as the facial expressions of the characters, the routines of the dialogues, and the clichés of the plot. Although there are various problems, the author is very careful and the operation is good, so you will not feel mentally tired after watching it. You can rest assured to try it.
