Some readers complained about the recent update, and some people said that the seven chapters of a game have not been finished yet, so it will be necessary to write ten chapters...
I also want to complain about these complaints - please, write ten chapters, or even more than ten chapters of the game is an important game, of course I have to write in detail. I have written countless games in this book, and there are also those that only cover one or two chapters.
A complete game, or even several games in one chapter... So there is no detailed outline when writing a novel? All plots must have a length, a capacity and a rhythm?
Is that called writing a novel?
That’s called a running account!
If I write ten or eight chapters for every game, I'll admit it. I can't write about important games in detail? Is this true? Who is writing this book? Who is controlling the rhythm of the storyline?
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My book has always followed this rhythm. Important games will be written in great detail, every detail is covered, whether it is this game or the previous important games.
After all, if I just brushed through an important game, what kind of important game would it be? So did some people start reading "" directly from this game? They hadn't read the more than three million words before?
I thought I had mentioned this issue many times. When you read the book and read this, those readers who are fans of the helm, at least all of them have subscribed to the VIP chapters, should also be very clear about the rhythm and habits of my book.
I won't dwell on this issue.
Who would have thought that as long as the length of writing about a competition is long, there will be some "shui shui shui" sounds from time to time:
Hullet's first game in the Premier League I started writing about everything before the game, but some people said it was "watery".
I also wrote about the last game of Hu Lai’s Chinese Super League championship in great detail. Some people said that it took too long to lose the passion.
I prepared the game for so long before Hu Lai played the South Korean team in the East Asian Cup, and some people said that the water would overwhelm the golden mountain.
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There are also many, many important games that I have spent a lot of time and space describing that are criticized by you. Now that I look back and read them, I still feel that they are well written:
Full of emotions, eloquent emotions, well-prepared, full of pictures, full of presence, making people feel like they are there... I am watching it now, and no matter how many times I watch it, I will still be fascinated by the descriptions in it.
infected.
These are shaped by words and space that are considered “water”.
Writing that the protagonist did not score a goal in the game, some people said it was unfair.
Writing the protagonist is not a competition. Some people say it is watery.
Some people say it’s unfair to write supporting roles instead of protagonists.
Shaping opponents and improving this virtual world are still controversial.
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Explain that I have said it so many times before that it makes me look like Xianglin's wife - but I can't help it. If I don't explain when someone talks about water, it will seem to them that I have acquiesced.
It seems that what they said is right. So the next time I encounter an important game like this and write a lot of chapters, someone will jump out and say "water, water, water."
I don’t remember that I specifically explained it before...
I really don’t want to explain it every time. After all, it wastes my time and affects my writing mood.
At the same time, it also affects everyone's mood when reading the book. After all, everyone talks about water, and there are always people who say water, and the rhythm will really be brought up. And those readers who don't think water will also be affected by the mood of reading the book, and may even cause discussions.
District quarrel.
So whenever I see something talking about water, I will delete it. Sorry.
Anyway, you told me to show it. I saw it and deleted it. There is no need to keep it to affect everyone’s mood and cause war.
Until now, I have spent more than ten hours writing two chapters every day. Therefore, I can say with my conscience that every word in this book is not watery, and every word has its own existence.
Value and meaning, every sentence has my thoughts buried in it... Some people can't see it, but it doesn't mean those words are meaningless and nutritious.
Although it is fictional, I don’t need to look up information like those previous books, but to build a world out of thin air, I still need to draw materials from reality, and I need to integrate the knowledge I have mastered before, and finally make this fictional world become enough
Believable.
I have put much more thought into this book than my previous books, and I believe readers who read carefully will be able to feel it.
I have always believed that an author’s greatest sense of achievement comes from the fact that his little thoughts hidden between the lines can be perceived by readers and resonate.
In other words, there is a tacit understanding between the author and the reader.
If there is no tacit understanding, you can only see "water" and "big water" from the thousands of words I wrote with my bare hair... Then I'm really sorry, you are not the target audience of this book, why bother yourself?
Of course, I also know that if I update ten times a day, even if I am really flooded, I am afraid that few people will really say that I am flooded. After all, "the amount is large and the pipe is full", so why do you need a bicycle? But I'm sorry that I can't do it.
It’s not that I don’t bother to do it, but I really can’t write so many words.
Important games often require an emotional outburst at the end, but the last week really made readers unable to maintain emotional coherence. But what should we do?
I can’t write the chapters in one day.
So when you see an important game, those who want to read it in one go should save it. Isn’t it good to read it after finishing one game?
If you are anxious and want to watch it as soon as possible, then be patient. I have neither a studio nor an AI coding program. I don’t have a head or six arms myself, and I can’t achieve the state of selflessness without caring about worldly affairs... I only have these hands.
, at this speed, and as age increases, the speed can only become slower and slower, and it is impossible to increase in reverse.
So just be patient for a while, or save for a while.
Don't just rush to this chapter and yell about "water". After you yell, you won't let me update faster, nor will I change the content immediately. I will still stubbornly follow my own pace.
Write.
Finally, I also saw someone saying that Lin Hai started to fill in crazily as soon as he reached the late stage of the novel, and it became a habit... I'm sorry, I'm only halfway through writing this book, and it hasn't entered the late stage yet, so I disappoint you.
A book with a volume of at least six million words, a key game that determines whether Hu Lai can win the first Premier League championship, ten chapters, 30,000 words, accounting for 1/200 of the total number of words...
Is it very watery? Is it very incomprehensible?
During the Qidian annual meeting, I stayed up late for three consecutive days typing in the hotel room, and I went to the backstage to comment on this chapter. I really couldn’t complain, so I wrote these complaints, which can be regarded as my "confession".
If this offends me, please forgive me for being so emotional.