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I read everyone’s feedback yesterday and I’m very happy that everyone gave me a lot of feedback.
I've sorted through everyone's feedback.
First of all, I chose to give up the first mode, because everyone said that they didn’t want to spend money, but others can read the complete version without spending money. This is unfair to readers who have already spent money. I respect everyone’s ideas and give up.
The first option.
Secondly, the number of readers who choose the second and third options is almost the same.
But, from my personal point of view, I would prefer this work to be better from the beginning.
So I decided to choose the second way, which is:
I will make modifications to the current original text. After modification, there will be a (revision) mark on the title.
Because I chose the second option, some readers who want to see the ending may feel a little sad, so I think that every day in the future, I will publish a single chapter to update everyone on the current modification progress until updates are resumed.
the idea of doing this,
On the one hand, it lets everyone know the progress of the modification;
On the one hand, it also lets everyone know what has been modified specifically, so that many people don't have to look back and can see what has been modified in a single chapter every day.
"Lie to Kangxi"
Of course, what I hope most is that everyone can revisit the world of "The Naming of the Night" with me.
Let’s synchronize the current modification progress with everyone:
From yesterday to today, I have revised a total of 40 chapters, that is, chapters 1-40.
Night's naming is still very playable in the early and mid-term, and I'm personally quite satisfied with it, so the changes aren't that big.
There are three overall modification directions:
The first direction: delete dispensable words and sentences.
The process of re-examining the manuscript also helped me discover something interesting, that is, no matter how good I once thought the writing was, it would still be filled with a lot of nonsense words. Because the new book issue has 6,000 words every day, so there are always 6,000 words in the new book issue.
There will be some nonsense.
I didn’t think much of it before, but looking back now I find it a bit dazzling, so the current chapters 1-40 are more concise.
I deleted about one-fifth of the length. I just took a look and my total word count started to drop...
This modification will not affect the
The second direction: fix some bugs, such as the first meeting between Li Shutong, Lin Xiaoxiao and Qingchen.
In fact, the character Qingzhun exists in the initial settings, but everyone knows that things like outlines and settings only exist in the initial settings and may be replaced or changed at any time.
So here comes the question. In the conception, Qingzhun was a great brother, but when I look back this time, I feel that the settings I once gave him are still too thin for him, so I stand by Qingzhun.
Thinking about Qing Zhun's life from the perspective of the story. After the refinement, many plots were added to make the before and after more harmonious. Li Shutong did not know anything about Qing Chen.
The third direction: modify Jiang Xue’s line.
Because I had compromised with the market and was not very good at writing about ambiguous relationships, I wrote some inexplicable things.
Looking back, the more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes.
The results were achieved and the money was made, but the taste of this work was wrong.
Therefore, I deleted some ambiguous content that should not have existed between Qingchen and Jiang Xue to make the work and the characters in it more pure.
That's it for now. If there are any changes to the plot line, I will let you know.
It is also a pity that some missing characters are missing. For example, the former Chuang King, you have been guessing his identity for a long time. The foreshadowing I set at that time was that he actually time-traveled into a mechanical dog...
Later, I suddenly discovered that I had forgotten this person...
To be honest, this trouble made me realize that I may not be suitable for long-term serialization. My energy and spirit are indeed not suitable for diluting it to more than three million words. Maybe early two million is the most suitable length.
Okay, that’s all for today. Subsequent modifications will be fed back to you every day. Thank you very much for your support and companionship! Thank you!
