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I revised Chapters 41-70 today.
Li Shutong began to have a deep relationship with Master Qingchen when he arrived here. When I re-read it, I found it more interesting.
So far, the most interesting characters in this book to me are Li Shutong, Li Xiurui, Qing Zhun, He Jinqiu, and Li Yunshou, three of whom have the surname Li.
However, the writing is still too hasty. In the future, except for Li Xiurui, everyone else will try to make it more full.
In addition, although Li Shutong disappeared due to a mission, there are a lot of missing scenes, and some new content will be added in the future.
Students who don’t want to read it again can read it in their daily revision notes.
Let’s talk about what we repaired today:
First, the character Du Yihong, the head teacher of Qingchen High School, was deleted.
In the original text, she suddenly resigned as the head teacher and then disappeared.
In the setting, she is a teacher who becomes a tattoo artist after traveling through time. She mixes in the club and interacts with the protagonist group again.
But Night’s Naming Technique has too many character lines, and people from audio dramas have reported that this is the work with the most characters they have ever done...
Therefore, some characters disappeared in the serialization. I can't even remember them, and I don't have the energy to write about them.
Secondly, the character Qingyan was deleted. In the original text, he was the one who arranged for Lu Guangyi and Qingchen to enter Prison No. 18, and was bribed by the second and fourth houses of the Qing family.
But now that I think about it, this character was also a bug, because everything was arranged by Qingzhun.
He is also very redundant.
Again, a small detail was added.
In Chapter 62, Li Shutong took Qingchen out of prison for the first time. Li Shutong ate a piece of braised pork and Qingchen ate a piece of fried noodles.
The Chen family and the Qing family launched a surprise attack and surrounded them. A combat team went up from the safe passage, but was knocked unconscious by the mysterious man.
I had forgotten about this foreshadowing before.
Details have been added here, and it is determined that Qingzhun did it. The elder brother protected the younger brother from being disturbed while eating.
Again, modify the conflict between the steam train and the train: the rear carriage is filled with gold coins and skeletons.
In the end, some ambiguous descriptions were still deleted, but Jindai Kongone is the main character, and the character cannot be deleted. She will be used to lead to the subsequent intersection with Jindai.
According to the progress, the Yangyang should be repaired tomorrow, right? We should also focus on repairing it here.
In the future, He Xiaoxiao will also increase his role appropriately. According to the settings, this account is actually Jiu Ran, but the character Jiu Ran was not promoted in the future. So after Boss He left, I didn’t know who to write about Kyushu.
