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Let’s talk about today’s modification progress first.
Today's revision of chapters is 71-100. Currently, one-ninth of the chapter progress has been completed. However, there are several subsequent parts that may involve substantial content modifications, which may slow down the progress. The further you go, the more difficult it will be to make changes.
But so far, I see that the content is becoming more and more reasonable and the plot structure has been adjusted, so I am still very happy inside.
Before I decided to modify it, it was very uncomfortable to think of so many flaws.
Some time ago, I even felt like I was breaking something, finishing it just for the sake of finishing it.
Things are different now, and the mentality is also different.
Then let’s talk about today’s modifications
The first modified content is that the gangsters went to kidnap Jiang Xue, but happened to encounter Hu Xiaoniu and others who threw themselves into the trap.
In the original article, Jiang Xue sent a message to Lu Yuan, but Lu Yuan was in arrears and his phone was shut down.
This was done to prevent them from contacting Kunlun, but it was actually quite bad. After all, how could a person like Lu Yuan be so stupid as to not keep his cell phone open even though he knew the gangsters had entered Luo City?
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So the new content is that the gangsters brought signal blocking equipment.
The second modification is the process of Hu Xiaoniu paying the gold bars.
In the original article, a gold bar was paid for saving his life, but this is completely inconsistent with Hu Xiaoniu's background and Hu Xiaoniu's generosity in giving away a watch worth more than 300,000 yuan. After all, a gold bar only costs more than 30,000 yuan.
So in the new modification, one number has become ten.
The third modification is to modify the logical sequence of Qingchen's discovery of the mole in the Laojun Mountain incident. This has little impact, so I won't go into details for now. It is not much different from the original text.
The fourth modification is that in the early stage, Qingchen insisted on making a deal with Li Shutong, exchanging the fruits of his own labor for Li Shutong's help, euphemistically calling it independence.
But actually when I re-read this paragraph, I thought that Qingchen was actually not that thin-skinned. This paragraph was a bit pretentious, so I deleted it.
The current content is that Qingchen calmly accepted the benefits from the master and even wanted to order more...
After all, this is the knight...
The fifth modification is that when I wrote the number of gangsters in Laojun Mountain in the original article, I actually checked it several times, but I still wrote it wrong.
The actual number of people should be nine, but I kept saying it was eight.
This matter makes me feel embarrassed just thinking about it...
Now, it has been modified!
Then let’s talk about some small details that we want to modify in the future.
The first one is that two Kunlun members, Wanwan and Hawthorn, sacrificed their lives to save students on Laojun Mountain.
The Morse code they passed on before their death, "No regrets in this life, take care", was written down by Qingchen and put in his wallet.
At that time, I planned to let it play an important role in some changes in Qingchen, but I forgot about it.
"The Romance of Fairy Wood"
This must come back to the plot later.
The second is that when I re-examined the character He Jinqiu at the beginning of the chapter, I found that there was too little description of him in the middle period.
He is actually a character who has taken some detours. Even in the story of Whale Island, many people wondered why Qingchen was unwilling to help him.
The reason is that in my concept, he was a slightly worse person, and later returned to the right path, but I didn't write it, I thought I did, so my perception is different from that of book friends.
I know there is a deviation...
This is also rather embarrassing.
Okay, that’s all for today, and I will share the progress with you every day in the future!
