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Today’s revision progress is chapters 131-160.
In this part of the plot, a pretty good supporting character appears, that is, the little guy Cao Wei who has been dealing with Qingchen for a long time.
At the same time, Qingchen also completed his first life and death test.
I read it back and forth and found that this part is really well written!
There are not many things that I have revised in this paragraph, but I have a lot of feelings about it.
Let’s talk about modifying the content first.
In this paragraph, in the original text, Qinghuai, the fourth brother of the Qing family, abandoned Cao Wei and retreated alone, but the setting here was actually very bad. As a direct descendant of the elite of the consortium, he should not do such a stupid thing.
Therefore, in the revised text, Qinghuai did not abandon Cao Wei and changed some content structures.
The only big change is this one. The small change is that Qin Yiyi did not tell his family that he was going to the fire pit.
Because she is a very sensible girl, if she really wants to do something risky, she will do it secretly by herself so as not to harm her family.
After talking about the changes, let’s talk about my feelings.
At that time, I had just started a new book, and my energy and energy were still good, so I was enthusiastic about writing anything.
After reading it again, when I saw the words "eternal youth" in Chapter 156, I realized that I actually made many mistakes in the middle and later stages.
During that time, the Operation Officer Incident occurred, which caused a huge uproar due to my improper handling of the matter.
Thinking about it now, the cause of the incident was that there was a problem with the distribution of event rewards, and then the two operating officers said unpleasant things. For example, Xiaonan said that the big friends came to participate in the event to collect wool, which was rumored to be "all bookings are for free."
The leader is true love'.
In fact, from the moment I learned about this matter, I should have fired the two operating officers directly, but I did not do so out of emotion.
The two operating officers have been with me for a long time, and everyone has been out of love and supported me for so long. I have always felt that even if the whole world says that this person is not good, you have to recognize him if he is good to you.
But now I think about it, whether I can be the operating officer or not has nothing to do with whether I can be friends or not. By that time, this matter had become a public incident and hurt the feelings of many book friends. Right and wrong is a very important thing.
Here I would like to apologize again to some book friends who were hurt at that time.
Later, in order to roll up the eagle, the number of daily updates was raised from 6,000 to 10,000, giving up some quality.
At that time, when I was updating 10,000 times a day, Eagle's 20,000 daily updates could no longer beat me. Just when I was complacent about becoming the number one bestseller, Eagle's daily updates became 35,000...
Absolutely amazing!
Probably starting from the plot of Mid-Levels Manor, I started writing 10,000 words a day. I didn't think it was anything at first, but gradually I began to feel overwhelmed. I couldn't keep up with the plots I conceived every day, and my writing was no longer so rigorous.
This sequelae is so slow that you may not even notice it.
The direct consequence is that I didn't handle the scene well when Qingchen was captured and taken to the A02 base.
It’s not that I shouldn’t be tortured. If I want to cultivate, I might be a little more tortured. Only with torture can I have passion.
I said it was not handled well because in the scene when the crew went north, Qingchen's role as a knight was missing and he was caught too hastily.
This is also something that needs to be fixed in the future.
In other words, this is the main thing I want to cultivate. From there, my writing is not as complete as before.
Of course, I woke up for a while and cheered up. When I broke out of the A02 base, I still wrote very well. It was also very good to accept Jinguji Maki as my disciple, but I broke my bones again...
Unlucky.
Recently, some book friends said that to code, you need to have the courage to write without regrets.
I still want to explain here that all high-quality paper books we can see on the market have been revised more than three times, and at least there will be three reviews and three proofreadings.
Then there are some books that even have a professional editorial team of 20 people to help revise the vocabulary.
Some people spend five years writing a book worth RMB 200,000 and revise it countless times.
The Legend of the Withered Heroes has been revised at least three times.
Coding is actually a process of polishing. It is very rough at first, but gradually becomes a work of art.
Of course, my pursuit of myself is not to write a work of art. I still have self-knowledge in my heart. This book is mainly written at the current stage. I can no longer ignore some of the shortcomings in the past, so I must come back and face the things I once escaped.
thing.
Watching Qingchen challenge life and death again today, I feel very emotional. I hope that I can always be sincere.
