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Today’s revised chapters are 231-260.
There are not many major changes:
The first modification is to continue the previous plot. Li Changqing and Qingchen are no longer forcibly twisted together, but formed a bond after Li Changqing was attacked. Qingchen showed more abilities when he was attacked, and he and Li Changqing
interaction, so the relationship between the two people progresses.
This modification takes more time.
Li Changqing is a very important character in this book, so the emotional line and plot line are more enriched and revised, not deleted.
The second modification is to add the death-seeking interaction between Li Tongyun and Jiang Xue in the daytime group chat. This is a small part.
The follow-up social death plots should also increase accordingly. The original social death plot was almost boring, and Xiao Tongyun’s beating was not enough.
The third thing is to revise the bad jokes.
In fact, some of the memes came from real life, and I thought they were good, so I included them, but looking back, they seemed a bit deliberately funny and not so natural.
No, to be precise, some of the jokes come from my wife.
Yesterday she and I saw a clip from a movie in which an old man burned paper for his deceased partner.
I asked her if she would give me a fever? I work so hard that I must be ahead of her.
She said happily: No.
I asked why?
She said men become bad when they have money...
I said I've already gone underground, but you still care whether I go bad or not?
She said that it was said on the Internet that you cannot support your husband richly...
I wrote this joke down in a memo and will put it in the novel appropriately in the future...
Okay, after talking about the modifications, let’s talk about everyone’s feedback yesterday, that is, the issue of tension caused by Qingye and Qingwu becoming shadow candidates.
The first thing to explain is that not all Shadow Candidates will die. For example, Keiichi’s behavior of giving Keiwen forbidden items is a life-saving behavior in Shadow Candidates.
For example, if the nine princes of the royal family seize the throne, not all the princes will die, and then only one will be left as the emperor.
Secondly, the length of the revised content is very early. If they are new readers and they see the name Qingye Qingqi, they will not know that these two people are still alive in the follow-up.
They won't see Qingye and Qingqu's names appear until one or two hundred chapters later. By then, there won't be much suspense about the Shadow War.
Therefore, it will not affect the reading atmosphere.
For example, you may not realize it now, but there is actually a shadow alive and helping Qingxun complete the foreshadowing of the Heaven and Earth chessboard.
The leader of the veteran shadow army is also in charge of the shadow of the previous generation who is "wandering around". This is also something that needs to be enriched in the future, and there is too little ink. (Qing must be this generation, Qingxun is the previous generation, Caramel
Qingchen is from the previous generation and is said to be very old. There is one person among them who has never appeared. It was first said that he went to wander around.)
Some of it is foreshadowing, but too little is written, making the work very thin.
Let’s talk about the decision to revise this article.
First of all, the epidemic in Sanya is still under lockdown. It has been a full month since I was under lockdown on 8.4.
And now I am in Jiyang District, the most serious area in Sanya...
There is no takeout and you cannot go out at will. You need to go out and line up for nucleic acid tests every morning in compliance with the epidemic prevention policy.
Then, when I was in the same room with my wife and children, Ren Xiaosu came to play games with me, and I couldn't sleep well (I usually sleep in separate rooms with my children to ensure work efficiency).
In fact, the plot suddenly accelerated in August, and my whole state was already close to collapse at that time. Coupled with the involution, at that time, I only had one thought, to finish it quickly, and I couldn't bear it anymore.
In this case, the code itself has no quality to speak of. If I were blocked as a bachelor, I might have more time, but being blocked with a child is completely different. I need to comfort my child at all times.
My wife has been unable to go out during this period, and her mood has occasionally lost control. Yesterday, she kept saying that she wanted to go home, and I needed to take time to accompany her... In short, this short period of time was quite helpless.
So what happened later was that I was sitting in front of the computer, unable to code anything, and still dissatisfied with the quality.
Take your time and review the previous plot.
Started to be depressed, autistic, and self-questioning.
Finally, I made up my mind that since I couldn’t write properly during this period of time, I would stop and revise my essay.
At present, there are still no signs of lifting the lockdown in Sanya. In my plan, the writing cycle should be 1-2 months. When Sanya lifts the lockdown and I review the past situation, I should be able to return to my normal coding life.
There are probably hundreds of thousands of words left in the final plot. It cannot be written overnight. It will take at least a month or two to complete. There are still ups and downs in the middle. Qingchen's path to becoming a god is not a direct massacre.
It's not that if I resume updating now, it will end the day after tomorrow... That's not the case.
So, why don’t you just treat me as having another broken bone?
If you want to relive Qingchen's world, just follow me and continue reading. If you don't want to read Xiuwen, just think that I took a two-month vacation...
Okay, that’s all for today. Thank you again for your support.