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Today’s modification progress is 260-280.
At present, the White House organization has just rescued Zhang Chengze, and Qingchen has just entered the Li School as a teacher. Looking back on the plot of him fighting for an office position, I still find it quite interesting...
Today’s modifications mainly focus on rescuing Li Chengze.
In the original text, Zhang Chengze asked Bai Zhou to help take care of him in the other world, indicating that the time traveler group in the world wanted to cut off the business, but Zhang Chengze went against his promise.
Qingchen taught the foursome a lesson and then rescued Zhang Chengze.
Later, they rescued Luo Wanya.
The plot of this protection fee is over.
At present, the plot of passers-by in the outside world has been deleted. In the future, the affairs of these passers-by who cut off the business will be merged into the Freemasonry. Then the daytime will collect protection fees from more people and merge the resources of these rich people in the outside world into
Hu Group, otherwise the rise of Hu Group in the original text would be too sudden.
"I Have a Picture Book of Ghosts and Gods"
In the original text, the interaction between Nangong Yuanyu and Qingchen of the Freemasons was a little less, and they started practicing according to the daytime very hastily. The follow-up was not distinctive, and it did not reflect the intelligence of their group of academic masters.
So tomorrow I will add this part of the plot, let them have a confrontation with Bai Bai due to business, and finally return to the original plot line.
This revision plan is to enrich this part of the character plot, otherwise the follow-up will appear too thin and will be "exited" invisibly.
What I was most dissatisfied with the second half of the plot was that many things were too rushed and many lines were not developed.
I will explain the newly added plots in the revision progress chapter.