I have been trolled so hard recently that I almost wanted to give up. After thinking about it, I decided to say a few words.
I am a novice, this is my first novel, so my level is definitely not as good as that of experienced readers.
Sometimes I want to explain everything clearly in one chapter, and sometimes I feel that if I write it this way, what is the difference between it and a manual.
So the writing is a bit messy and I don't know how to do it.
Occasionally I read comments saying that no one would read your book without women, so I thought about writing about women.
As a result, someone later said, if you can’t write about women well, then stop writing...
Others said that your writing was too poisonous and a dialogue with the ancients, and it was a huge failure.
Others say that your time-travel plot is too random and boring.
In addition, some people said that your protagonist is just like Shabi, brainless and cowardly. He didn't understand the golden finger in dozens of chapters...
I accept these criticisms.
Not only do I accept it, I also hope that you old readers can give me more suggestions.
Because as a newbie, there are no writers in my circle, so I really don’t know much about writing books.
I have never written a novel, so any element in the book was my first time writing it.
I may be good at some elements, but I can't grasp the point of others when writing.
But the problem is that I don’t even know what I’m good at, so I have to write them all before I can see the problems. It’s the first one anyway, and I’ll know where I’m good and where I’m bad after reading it.
At least now, I know I'm not good at writing about women...
In addition, I actually regret that these comments come too late.
I wrote the book on a stand-alone machine, saved the manuscript until it reached chapter 40, and uploaded the text to chapter 10, before I got the first comment.
It was only after I uploaded it to chapter 50 that the first person came to troll me, and he trolled me very harshly. He was trolling me for having incorrect three views.
By this time, my stand-alone career was almost over, and I realized that there were so many problems with my books.
Of course, in addition to complaining, I also gave a lot of suggestions, such as how to write this sentence and how to change it into something that would be better.
Hey... I really wish someone could say that from the beginning, that would be great.
I am deeply grateful to everyone who has provided criticisms and suggestions, and I sincerely hope that you can give me more advice in the future (literally, without ridicule).
I will strive to make progress next.
Now that I have written it here, I cannot change the previous one.
I don't want to change either.
Just treat it as black history, put it there, and when you are in trouble later, look back and take a look at it, and learn from history.
.....
Also, let’s talk about the plot so far.
The protagonist is reborn, accidentally obtains a mute golden finger, travels through time for the first time, and receives three rewards: acting, wealth, and skills.
The protagonist relied on some acting skills to gain some favor, won the next small role, and got the next opportunity to travel through time.
After the second time travel verification, the protagonist chose to embrace wealth and skills, that is, profit, and subjectively abandoned fame.
Profit refers to all the actions of the protagonist later on. He is no longer involved in the entertainment industry, he is just using the crew.
When I watched "Little Li Flying Knife", I realized that wealth could not satisfy me, so I chose to embrace the extraordinary.
Seeking the extraordinary has become the guideline for all subsequent actions.
In order to be extraordinary, the protagonist can pretend to be a grandson, contact people he doesn't like, and make compromises with anyone who can help him achieve his goal.
At the same time, because Goldfinger is mute, the protagonist has to do experiments again and again, and finally understands the mechanism of Goldfinger.
So until here, a month has passed, and the protagonist has managed to figure out the golden finger under limited conditions and time. I think the plot logic is still reasonable.
And the behavioral logic is also reasonable. After all, if I wrote that the protagonist gave up being extraordinary and chose to embrace profit, he would probably be criticized even more miserably.
In fact, in the final analysis, I think it is still a matter of writing strength. What I want to write and what I want to highlight is not written, but what I shouldn’t write is written vaguely and clearly.
Sometimes you should write in a different way so as not to discourage readers so much, but unfortunately, my writing power is limited.
But again, even if my level becomes higher in the future, I won’t come back and change it, it’s meaningless.
So for new readers, if you don’t want to be poisoned, just skip the first sixty chapters.
Finally, what to write next.
The protagonist's goal is still to become a god, and I won't engage in the trap of trying for a golden finger, so next the protagonist will have a clear purpose. In order to become a god, he will rely on the golden finger to accumulate capital and backstage, rush into the entertainment industry, and embrace fame and fortune.
One word: indiscriminate killing.
That's roughly it. If it's well written, you can give it a vote.
If the writing is not good, just criticize a few words and I will accept it.
I'm a newbie anyway, so I still have a long way to go, right?