Chapter 1, Paragraph 6: "There is a so-called love at first sight in this complicated time" should be a complicated world (Is this considered two typos?)
Paragraph 7: "I believe it a little bit, but I don't doubt it." The concept of "believe it a little, but I don't doubt it" means a firm concept, which seems to be a contradiction to this "being". (This is a friendly reminder, and there is no typo^_^)
Paragraph 9: "The light green and long figure"? What is the concept of long? Slim? How does the figure sway? Is it others swaying? It should be clothes or clothes swaying?
I read a lot later, but I didn't find a typo or a ignorant sentence. Although Meng Da's writing skills are nothing to say, the poems and songs are just right, which highlights Lin Yu's mood, making people unconsciously be
Bringing into the plot:
The beginning of the article uses a lot of pen to exaggerate Lin Yu's longing for Meng'er, but suddenly turns: It's over, I'm going to get married with others! I can't help but sigh that good fortune is so good that from now on, the heroes and beautiful women have ended. But how can the heroes let the world go
Loneliness? Not only did the masters of the Western Region Demon Sect appear one after another, but they also had a close relationship with Qing'er.
In the description of the fight, there is a shadow of Mr. Jin. For example, in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", Mr. Jin first highlighted the reputation of some heroes in Jianghu, such as the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan, Qiu Chuji, etc., and then when Mei Chaofeng appeared, all of them were all
It’s not a dish, but then I will bring out the East Evil and Western Poison, and I will hardly describe it in words. The outstanding martial arts of the East Evil and Western Poison have been deeply rooted in people’s hearts. For example, in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", it first highlights the strength of the storm and evil in the Xingzi Forest.
Then Qiao Feng took action and the superiority immediately appeared. Mengda used the same technique, such as the number one killer Leng Ye, the peach blossom thief, etc., to first show his background and influence in the world, and then all defeated Lin Yu
Under the command, do you need too many collapses of the sky and earth, and winds surging to describe Lin Yu's martial arts? No, Lin Yu's martial arts have been deeply rooted in people's hearts.
Suspense is a popular killer weapon. The emperor is most taboo to marry officials of the capital and the vassal kings and forces in the world, but now he wants Lin Yu to marry at Aolin Villa. Why? The emperor's head is stuck in the door? Or is there another secret?
Lin Yu is not very familiar with the world, but he is repeatedly hunted down by masters of the Western Region Demon Sect. Why? These suspense settings are from shallow to deep, and they advance the plot step by step, making people unable to stop.
It is said that martial arts is unpopular because martial arts does not have the ability to make hundreds of millions of years of experience and does not have the majesty that swept the universe. However, martial arts is as fragrant as tea, profound as a long history, and has a strong accumulation of Chinese classical culture, which can also touch and shock.
The past and present are just the busy urban rhythm that makes people calm down and savor it carefully, and blindly pursue the so-called empty and refreshing points. However, online culture will eventually have a way to go, and martial arts novels will also occupy an important part of it. Hope Dream
He sticks to his dreams and style and becomes a rising star in the online literature industry.