First of all, at first glance at the chapter names, the ancient style comes to mind, and the arrangement is compact and eye-catching.
There are many ancient poems in the text, and most of them are sad. It can be seen that the author does have a high literary foundation. This is the highlight of this book.
About the plot: The male protagonist abandons literature and martial arts at the beginning, and the martial arts master goes down the mountain to unfold the story. The plot develops very quickly. I suggest that the author can slow down a little. The male protagonist is strong and kills many masters. There can be more fighting plots. This is okay.
It’s more enjoyable to watch and has a stronger sense of immersion.
In addition, martial arts novels emphasize the love and hatred between children, chivalry and courage. I really hope that the male protagonist can have a confidant and beauty.
There is also the aspect of personal wording, but I saw that someone has already said it, so I won’t say more.
Generally speaking, the writing is fluent and the plot is compact. There is a lot worth learning.
What impressed me the most was that the author really put his heart into it, and there are notes about the source of ancient poems at the end of each chapter.
A small suggestion should be to add more conspiracy plots. You can write a male protagonist who not only has high strength, but also has a high IQ. The reason is of course the sense of substitution.