When you first read your article, you have an illusion, like a woman wrote. Since ancient times, women like to read those sad and sad poems, such as me. I didn't expect you to write them into such a novel. The male protagonist is very powerful and has a very quick move.
.There are various events slowly written later, making the hero's sad image at the beginning of the story abnormal. I hope he can have a good wife and no longer suffer from lovesickness.
Personal opinion, the text is written in detail, which means that the personal word use needs to be modified (for example, yes, it is). If there are too many repetitions in a paragraph, it will increase the repetition of the text and need to be streamlined. Individual word use can also be modified appropriately
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Regarding the plot of the novel, I feel that it is developing so fast, and I can't keep up. I also read martial arts novels. I personally like the grievances and disputes of martial arts novels, which are related everywhere, flowing and flowing, and it will come naturally. Maybe I like to substitute when reading your article, that is,
The characters you set up for you want to have an image, and when you watch it, you will substitute the plot to make them more vivid, so you feel that the plot develops too fast.
Regarding supporting roles, they all die very quickly. Alas, handsome guys and beautiful girls all die quickly. This makes me very interested in the big boss behind them. They are all very strong, but they still die very quickly. So, what will the boss look like
"It's so confusing.
Female supporting roles are so beautiful. Qingxuan will not abuse them all very badly, right? Women need to love them, so don’t abuse them too badly.
Finally, my personal opinions have been published. I wish Qingxuan’s article a prosperous and deeply rooted in the hearts of the people!