The article is smooth and free, free and natural, without any pretentiousness; although I am writing about Western fantasy, I have to admit that the author has high literary attainments.
Ahem! I won’t say anything politely, I’d better say it first.
The beginning of the story is inspired by "Three Five and Seven Characters" and elegant and in line with the general meaning; but the most important thing is that it conforms to the pain of Lin Yu's unrequited love.
On the way to Aolin Villa, the first battle scene in this article appeared. Although it was short, the effect was extraordinary, and the image of the protagonist and the golden finger were also clearly expressed at this moment.
The plot is roughly coherent and easy to understand, and the most important thing is that the writing is relatively delicate, which plays a crucial role in female frequency and martial arts novels...
The problem lies
Maybe because I didn't read much, I only read nine chapters, but I also found a big problem.
What is the purpose and main task of this book? Perhaps the author has explained it in the article I posted but I don’t see it, but I think the main line is best shown in the previous chapters, usually martial arts novels (ahem, TV series, etc.)
It is nothing more than being trapped by love, avenging someone, or saving people like the Legend of the Condor Heroes.
Overall, this is a good book, and I hope the works will be sold out.