I like this book, both in terms of concept and writing style. From the first chapter, I have the desire to continue reading.
However, I feel that some details in this book still need to be strengthened.
For example, the two poems in Chapters 1 and 2 are actually very fond of Liu Yong's "Yulin Ling", and the places they appear in the article are also used very appropriately, which not only exaggerates the atmosphere but also expresses the emotions of the characters.
The finishing touch. But the first
In the second chapter, the song "Partridge Sky" appears again, but it still uses the same sentence "I can't help but murmur out", which seems repetitive, and it is suspected of showing off literature. If the expression "Partridge Sky" is introduced in another way, maybe
will be better.
When a person's greatest hope fails, the sadness and loneliness in his heart may remind him of the words, but he will only recite them silently in his heart, and is not in the mood to recite poetry. At most, he may smile helplessly.
Of course, this is just Zuo Ran's opinion. If there is anything inappropriate in what he said, please don't be offended by the author.