I would like to write a summary, report on the situation, and talk about the issues that you are concerned about.
Then let’s talk about them one by one.
So far, my own evaluation of the first volume is 60 points, barely passing.
Among them, there is a problem with my own state. After all, I haven’t picked up a pen for too long. Although I have accumulated a lot of topics, there are still problems with the writing. Some chapters have a poor feeling and power, and they are not fully written.
The perfect picture in my mind.
I feel that when I was in good shape before, my pen was not blowing... I felt that I could 100% present the picture in my mind.
There are also issues like publishing a book, testing the water, failing to promote it, and some changes in mentality, resulting in greater ups and downs. I will adjust and try my best to adjust it to the best.
There are actually some problems with the structure of the first volume. The main problem is the lack of excitement, but in fact it is possible to achieve the coexistence of excitement and personal feelings. This is the general direction in the future.
The rhythm is also a little slower, which is not in line with the current mainstream.
Therefore, the second volume will definitely have more exciting points than this volume, and the pace will be a little faster without losing the personal feeling.
There is also the issue of barrage.
The idea came from Love Apartment. Don’t guess. I wanted to write it a long time ago, but I never took it out.
I also tried to write several versions, but most of them didn’t feel very good and needed a theme to carry it.
Later, I chose the era of future barrage + 2008. It seemed a bit similar to the reborn prophet Goldfinger, but in fact the advantages and disadvantages were obvious.
This book cannot have such a certain sense of prophecy, a clear main line of rebirth that makes up for regrets, and the kind of emotion and look back that can make people remember their youth.
But with some more interesting complaints, it can be more relaxed, more interactive, and a way to forcibly turn interesting storylines through barrage.
The role of barrages will be revealed more in the plot of the second volume in the future.
But since it is not that he is not prophetic, the protagonist must also grow himself, and it will not be as simple and direct as the rebirth novel, which is just used.
As for the live broadcast article...it has nothing to do with this book. The protagonist knows that he is live broadcasting, and he does not know that he is live broadcasting. They are completely different things. In 2008, there is obviously no concept of live broadcasting.
I want to ask you about the proportion of love line and career line.
I currently think it should be opened at 6:4, love line 6, career line 4, or 6.5:3.5. I don’t know if you think it is acceptable. If you have any opinions, please give it.
As for the tangle of emotional scenes.
In fact, I think it’s interesting to watch only when you’re in a dilemma. It’s completely smooth sailing and you’ll get tired of it after a while.
It’s not like I’ve never written about a single heroine. From a writing perspective, it’s very limiting.
Then I want to ask you a question, do you really think that a person can only fall in love once in his life?
Does one love last a lifetime...
If you are too young and haven't talked about it once, I'm sorry, I was offended...
It's just that there is life in the title of the book. Although it cannot describe everything in Chen Zui's life, it does have several emotional experiences. Isn't that normal?
I actually hate labeling, it seems to be doomed immediately.
Single heroine, multiple heroines, harem, scumbag, once it’s stuck on, it seems like it’s impossible to take it off.
But in fact, it always depends on how it is written. If we have to talk about labeling, this book must have multiple female protagonists, but I would also like to say that the emotional line of this book is Chen Zui’s emotional experience.
, just like sauce.
There are joys and sorrows, as well as joys and separations. Of course, it is an online article after all. It is used to entertain the public and will not cause trouble for everyone. The proportion of joys and separations is very small.
Just like you and me, we will fall in love more than once. (Sorry, I offended you because I haven’t done it before, but believe me, you will not fall in love just once for the rest of your life. If you really do it, congratulations, you
Achieved something that 99% of people in the world cannot achieve.)
In the next volume, I will actively adjust my state and write well with more dedication and concentration.
In the next volume, there will be more exciting points, as well as substantial progress in the emotional line.
Let’s wait and see for the next volume.
Of course, in the end, what must be emphasized is the issue of performance.
In fact, I don’t know much about whether my current grades are good or bad. I haven’t asked about pursuing further studies because the app failed once. Maybe it was because the number of words was too few. In the past two weeks, it was recommended on the PC version that was useless.
Oh, yes, there is also a data stream that will be included in every book after 100,000 words. So far, the effect seems to be good.
But...the situation is not optimistic either.
Do you want to eat...
The current starting point selection basically depends on follow-up reading, especially VIP follow-up reading.
So, here, I once again urge everyone not to keep books.
Recommended votes.
Monthly pass.
Follow up.
Follow up.
Follow up.
Say important things three times.
Here you go, a 360-degree backflip, please read it.