Everyone was very curious and asked what it meant to be painful but not sad but not hurt.
Xie Yingying said with a smile: "This is a topic that Mr. Lin gave me before. When I played Du Shiniang, I rehearsed it more than 20 times, but Mr. Lin was not satisfied. He said that I wanted to play Du Shiniang's "sad but not sad" character.
The emotion comes from "hurt, pain but not sadness". How do I understand this? I haven't figured it out for many days. I have these eight words in my mind during the day and night, but I always can't get the point. That's called pain."
Everyone was stunned and speechless, smacking these eight words secretly, and suddenly they were speechless. It seemed that they didn't know how to express this emotion of "sorrow but not hurt but not sad".
"But you performed so well later that I even cried." Guo Caiwei said with a smile.
Xie Yingying said: "The princess didn't know, but later I got the taste. He wanted my performance to be restrained and powerful, to be flexible and flexible, and in his words not to be overflowing with emotions. Mr. Lin said: When an actor cries on stage,
The audience in the audience also cries, which is not called cleverness. The real mastery is that the actors on the stage do not cry, but the audience in the audience cry. The former is called infection, and the latter is called resonance. Acting is to bring the audience into the role and create emotions
Resonate instead of letting them cry with you. After listening to this passage, I really captured some of the essence."
The girls looked at Lin Jue with admiration. Guo Caiwei smiled and said, "I didn't expect that my husband has studied this very deeply."
Lin Jue waved his hand and smiled and said: "It's just guessing. In fact, some things have been figured out. For example, when writing poems and articles, isn't it the same? Words must resonate and make people's hearts feel sad. That is good poetry and articles.
.I think the same should be said for performances. I'm all just guessing, so don't take it seriously. In short, listen to it if it makes sense, and forget about it if it doesn't make sense. When Du Shiniang's play was performed, it was to win the audience.
As an oiran, Yingying didn’t have much experience at the time, so I could only ask her according to my own understanding. In fact, I wasn’t even sure whether it would succeed.”
Everyone burst into laughter. Guo Caiwei even laughed and said: "It turns out that you were also giving blind orders. If your understanding at the time was wrong, wouldn't it be a big mistake?"
Lin Jue smiled and said: "How could it be? I wrote Du Shiniang's script myself, how could I not know what to do? I naturally have a good idea in my heart."
Everyone nodded, and there was nothing to refute. He wrote the play himself, and created the characters himself. He naturally has a clear understanding of the character and temperament, and can naturally grasp it accurately.
"Then what questions will Mr. Lin take on me? Xiaoxiao is brave enough to give it a try." Qin Xiaoxiao felt a competitive spirit in her heart and felt eager to try.
Lin Jue smiled and said: "That's all, I won't take the test on you. I believe you are smart and I have seen your performance. The advice I can give you is: read more and enrich your heart.
It can also better understand the lyrics and characters, which will be of great help to the performance. You are like Yingying, who has been working hard to study and increase her knowledge, so her performance is perfect and she becomes popular wherever she goes. Hangzhou Capital
The audience recognizes her, this is her ability."
Xie Yingying said shyly: "Young master, please don't praise me like this. I don't have the ability."
Lin Jue said with a smile: "This is not a wild boast, it is a fact. And Yingying has learned to write her own storybooks. This is proof. If you write the characters in your own storybooks, you will be more comfortable in acting them."
Xie Yingying's eyes lit up and she said, "Have you finished reading the storybook? Is the writing still interesting?"
Lin Jue took out the storybook from his arms and said with a smile: "I have finished reading this play "The Legend of the Red Dust". It is very well written. I have decided to make it the premiere play of Semicolon Theatre."
Xie Yingying said excitedly: "Is it true? Can it really be staged?"
Lin Jue nodded and said: "Yes, but some modifications are needed. Just in front of everyone, I will share some opinions and ideas. If you agree, I will make some modifications."
Xie Yingying nodded repeatedly and said, "That's up to you, I will definitely modify it."
Lin Jue looked at Xie Yingying and said: "If I understand correctly, this "Red Dust" is based on your own experience, right? I see many familiar shadows in it."
Xie Yingying's face turned red, she glanced at the people around her and said softly: "Yes."
This is indeed a storybook written by Xie Yingying based on her own experience. It started when her parents died and she was sold into a brothel by relatives, until she emerged, learned skills and established a firm foothold. In it, she refused temptation, kept herself clean, and insisted on performing arts but not selling herself.
; and encountered many coercions, threats, persuasion and temptations. Finally, I met my beloved, decisively retreated after winning the oiran, and ended up with my beloved. Essentially, it was written based on my own experience.
It is a story of struggle that is not willing to give in to fate. Of course, it is also a story of two people who are happy when the flowers are full and the moon is full.
Lin Jue quickly saw through this after reading the storybook. Moreover, when Lin Jue saw the description of Mr. Li who rescued the heroine, he smiled bitterly and shook his head. Mr. Li obviously wrote it based on himself. He just wrote it.
Gao Daquan simply had no shortcomings at all. Not only was he both civil and military, but he was also noble in character and upright. He had a flawless image of greatness and integrity. Although this reflected his own image in Xie Yingying's heart, it also made Lin Jue feel that it was a bit exaggerated and
Unreal.
Xie Yingying lowered her head and thought: "He has seen through this. The final ending I wrote was to marry him and become his only woman. Does he think I am too greedy? The princess doesn't know if she has read it.
There is no such thing. If she reads it, wouldn’t she be unhappy?”
In Xie Yingying's random thoughts, Lin Jue's words rang out: "It is true that for first-timers, writing stories based on their own experiences is a good way. This can avoid the risk of not knowing where to start. There is a saying that creation comes from
This is the truth in life. No matter what good drama, it should have the shadow of life and real feelings. This is a smart way to get started..."
Xie Yingying felt happy. Lang Jun was praising herself. It seemed that she was on the right track.
"...However, there is another sentence to that sentence: Creation comes from life, but is higher than life. Real life is trivial, even a little boring. The story presented on the stage must be wonderful and concise
.If the audience is allowed to sit in the audience for an hour or two, most of the time will be spent on trivial matters such as food, rice, oil, and salt. No one can sit still. Therefore, it must be refined and appropriately exaggerated, or even fictionalized. Although your words are completely
There is no problem with the structure, but I have to tell you bluntly that this story cannot be performed on the stage at the moment. If it wants to open in Semicolon and become a first-time show, there are still a lot of things missing."
Xie Yingying's face turned red and she was quite embarrassed. After praising her in front of her head, she almost completely denied it with these few words. She said she could perform on stage before, but now she said she couldn't. It was really embarrassing.
Lu Wu gently pulled Lin Jue's clothes, meaning to ask Lin Jue not to speak so directly. In front of so many people, how could he not give face to Miss Yingying.
Lin Jue seemed unaware and said to himself: "Yingying, I'm not trying to embarrass you, I'm teaching you how to write a script. Your script is actually not bad. What I'm talking about is to perform it on stage as a script.
It still needs to be modified, I said so before, didn’t I?”
"Master, please continue speaking. Yingying is listening." Xie Yingying raised her head and boldly looked at Lin Jue. She was not a stingy person, and she would not complain because of it. She was very good at regulating herself.
"Okay, let me make three suggestions. First, delete some trivial fragments from the plot. For example, the scene of practicing skills can be passed over in one stroke. I suggest using the changes in the slide screen to show the scenery of the four seasons of spring, summer, autumn and winter to express a
The effect of practicing skills year after year. There is no need to describe the hardship in a long way. We all know the hardship, but the audience is not interested." Lin Jue said.
Xie Yingying nodded and said: "That's right, I remember it."
"Second, increase conflicts. The role of mother... don't follow the prototype. I know that Sister Danhong has always been very good to you, but writing it in the storybook cannot highlight the difficulty of your situation, let alone the difficulty of getting ahead.
"I suggest that the role of mother should be written in the most vicious way. The more ruthless, greedy and cruel the better," Lin Jue said.
Xie Danhong rolled her eyes in the aside and said, "I...am I that kind of person? Aren't you going to destroy me?"
Lin Jue said with a smile: "This is a story, it's a lie. In reality, Sister Danhong is a first-class good person, we all know this. But it can't be acted like this in the story. We have acted in so many dramas, you guys
Don’t you understand the reason for this comparison? Li Jia in Du Shiniang and the old lady in Romance of the West Chamber, don’t they all have people like this?”
Xie Danhong smacked her lips and said: "That's all, for the sake of money, I don't care anymore."
Everyone pursed their lips and snickered.
Xie Yingying nodded and said, "Okay, I'll change it."
Qianqian suddenly gritted her teeth and said, "Just change it like Li Youyuan. Force people to pick up guests, give them aphrodisiacs, whip them, lock them in a dark room, he can do anything."
Lin Jue chuckled and said: "Yes, talk to Miss Qianqian, learn about the shady story behind it, and change it based on Li Youyuan's prototype."
Everyone burst out laughing.
"What else? Is there anything else that needs to be changed?" Xie Yingying asked with a frown.
"The third point is the most important point, to increase conflict. Without conflict, there will be no drama. The biggest problem with this story is that there are few conflicts and they are single. The faces of the patrons are single, and this kind of conflict is not rich enough. I
It is recommended to add heroines, increase the breakdown of sisterhood, increase the fate of different women, and enhance the sense of contrast, loss and aftertaste. For example... how about several women competing for husbands?"
"..."
Everyone was stunned and confused.
"Hey, it's just...going crazy...this...love triangle...this...competition, unscrupulous competition..." Lin Jue scratched his head and thought of a way to explain.
"I understand what the young master means." Zheng Nuanyu suddenly said among the crowd of big eyes and small eyes.
"Do you understand? Please explain it to us." Qin Xiaoxiao shouted.
