Zheng Nuanyu nodded and smiled and said: "I think I should understand what Mr. Lin means. Mr. Lin thinks the plot is too thin. Although I haven't read Yingying's story, I understood most of it just now.
What Gongzi means is that with just one heroine, the plot is not full enough and there are not enough conflicts. Not only male villains must be added, but also female villains must be added. For example, a woman who grew up with the same miserable life experience as the heroine must be added.
, originally had a good relationship with the heroine, but later, in order to compete for the upper hand, she secretly used conspiracy and tricks to harm the protagonist. This is a good conflict. Later, when she met Mr. Li, the villain heroine also tried every means to get Mr. Li's
She secretly created misunderstandings and rumors, making it difficult for Mr. Li and the protagonist to harmonize their feelings. When the truth finally came out, everyone saw through her true colors. This woman died in disgrace, which made people lament and pitiful, but also gave her a strong feeling.
Comparison. Is this what Young Master means?"
Lin Jue laughed and said: "What Miss Zheng said is exactly what I want to say. It is to have a sense of shock, a sense of the impermanence of fate, and in the end it is necessary to promote justice, but it also has a sense of warning to the world."
As far as the play is concerned, this is the basic routine of conflict, character, and plot evolution. It's just... it's a bit too bloody, but as long as it can capture people's hearts and win applause, it has achieved its goal."
Everyone was speechless, and Xie Yingying murmured: "When I heard what you said, I felt enlightened. Well, I have to rewrite this sentence. I must write the effect that the master wants."
Lin Jue said: "Yingying, I'm not being picky. You know that the inner city branch will be completely renovated in the middle of next month. As the opening act, it must be an instant hit. Moreover, if you want to launch it, you must have pillars.
If it is good, it would be a foil. If there is only one heroine in this play, it will not have such an effect. Therefore, dual heroines are a good choice. You can play the leading role in the play, and the other heroine can also play a big role.
Although he is a villain, he is a pitiable and pitiable character. If this drama can become a mainstay, then Semicolon will undoubtedly be a great success. If I were not worried that the plot is too dragging, I would even start
I want to write a play "Five Golden Flowers" based on your script, and the newly joined girls can each play a role and be the protagonists."
"Okay, okay, Mr. Lin, why don't you write it?" Qianqian clapped her hands and shouted.
"I can write, but not now." Lin Jue smiled.
At this point, the topic about the new drama written by Xie Yingying has come to an end. Everyone, including Xie Yingying, has learned a lot today. Although Lin Jue just talked about some trivial thoughts today, for several women, no matter whether it is
Both their understanding of acting skills and their knowledge of the plot of the play have improved a lot. These people are all the best in their respective youth clubs, and their talents are all excellent. When they meet a famous teacher like Lin Jue, they are naturally a little bit better.
Clear stool and benefit a lot.
Sometimes, when a person's artistic attainments reach a bottleneck, or when the understanding of a certain thing is in a hazy state, what is needed is that finishing touch to suddenly open up the world and open up a new world. It's just that many times it doesn't happen.
Go to the person who helps you open up a new world. This is what happens to horses with a thousand li, but not to Bole. To a certain extent, these women are lucky.
Many years later, Zheng Nuanyu and Qin Xiaoxiao, who have become the most dazzling drama actors in the Zhou Dynasty, will still talk about today's conversation from time to time, lamenting the kindness of Mr. Lin. But that is a story for another time.
Everyone was chatting and laughing easily. It was almost evening now, and Lin Jue proposed that they go to a restaurant for a lively meal together. The girls naturally responded in unison. Just when everyone got up and prepared to pack up and leave, there was a sudden burst of noise.
There was a sound outside, as if there was some kind of dispute.
Xie Danhong hurriedly went to check, and came back after a while. She said with a white face: "It's amazing, the demon king is here again. Yingying, hurry up and hide."
Xie Yingying was also a little panicked and said hurriedly: "Why is the ghost still here to harass me again?"
Xie Danhong smacked her lips and said: "Don't say anything anymore, you just walk from the back and I will handle it."
Lin Jue was confused and frowned: "What is going on? Who is going to cause trouble?"
Xie Danhong said: "Hey, sir, don't worry about it. There is a dandy who often comes to the theater, but it seems... he seems to be obsessed with... Yingying. He always wants to break in to see Yingying. He is rejected every time.
Don’t give up, no, here we are again. There is a commotion at the door. The gatekeeper, Old Huang, was slapped several times. Don’t worry about me, I’ll go and send you away. It’s inevitable to encounter such things when doing business.”
Lin Jue said angrily: "Why didn't you tell me? What do you mean it's inevitable? Are you hiding it from me if someone comes to bully you?"
The little princess also frowned and said: "Who is so bold? Making a scene in front of someone's business in broad daylight. This is a theater, not a brothel. Why don't you report it to the official and send him away?"
Several women next to him were from brothels, and they all turned red with embarrassment when they heard this and did not dare to answer the question. The little princess did not do this intentionally, she was just discussing the matter.
"Oh, sir, don't I want to disturb you? Yingying said, this is not a big deal, just hide away. After a while, that person will be boring, so that's it." Xie Danhong said with a quick apology.
Lin Jue frowned and looked at Xie Yingying. Xie Yingying said hurriedly: "You have been very busy during this period, so I... didn't tell you, so as not to worry you. It's okay. I will leave as soon as this person comes. Why bother with such a person?"
Chi Qi?"
Yes, Mr. Lin, the princess, we are open to do business, and it is best to be friendly and make money. How can we get into a lawsuit? Besides, you can’t mess with that person. He claims to be... he is the prime minister’s office, a relative of the emperor...
"Xie Danhong said with an apologetic smile.
"Is it him?" Lin Jue and Guo Caiwei looked at each other and shouted at the same time.
"Yes...it's that Lu Yanei..." Lu Wu also thought about it.
"Hahaha, this is fate. Let's go and have a look. Let's go meet my old acquaintance Lu Tianci." Lin Jue said with a smile.
"Old... acquaintance? Turns out to be an acquaintance of the young master? That's great. Well, the slave family and Yingying didn't dare to tell the young master, for fear that the young master would get angry and go to argue with him, which would cause trouble. If he knew it was
Old acquaintance, I should have told the young master a long time ago." Xie Danhong said in surprise. Lin Jue sneered: "Yes, we are very familiar with each other, it is a life-long friendship. Let's go and take a look."
Lin Jue walked out. Qianqian and others were eager to see the excitement and followed him out laughing. Xie Yingying reached out and grabbed Lu Wu's arm, frowned and asked in a low voice: "Are you really an acquaintance of the young master?"
Lu Wu blinked and said, "That's right. On March 3 this year, in front of the Xiangguo Temple, this Lu Yanei offended the princess sister and me, and the young master beat him half to death. If we don't beat him, we won't get to know each other. This may be what the young master means."
"Ah?" Xie Yingying was stunned on the spot.
…
Everyone came out from the backstage and went straight to the theater door. Before they reached the door, they heard a commotion.
"Eh hee hee, give me a beating, beat these dogs to death, and the people watching their grand theater can't get out? His grandma's legs, this Yanei praises them so much, but he doesn't even give them any face. Even the theater
Even if you don’t get admission, what does this mean? Do you think this Yanei is easy to bully? Let me tell you, if you really offend this Yanei, I will order people to set fire to your theater. Beat you, beat you hard.
.After the beating, Xie Yingying came out to see my Yanei and begged for mercy from my Yanei. Hehehehe."
Hearing this weird laughter, the little princess immediately frowned tightly. She remembered what happened in front of the Daxiangguo Temple that day. This must be Lu Tianci. The sharp laughter was mixed with punches and kicks.
Kicking, scolding and cursing, groaning and shouting, it was a noisy mess.
With a livid face, Lin Juetie quickly rushed to the door where the gate was set. Several theater guards were blocking the door. A dozen servants in short shirts in front were punching and kicking them to greet them. The duties of several theater guards
Although he was beaten to a bloody head, he did not take a step back.
Lin Jue frowned and watched all this, and shouted in a low voice: "If you don't fight back, you don't fight back, you don't curse back, what does this mean?"
Guo Caiwei nodded and shouted: "That's right, this bitch will eat hard things but not soft things. The more he does this, the more arrogant he becomes. Come here and beat those losers out."
After Guo Caiwei finished speaking, the seven or eight palace guards who followed him immediately took orders and rushed out of the door. A group of servants were beating and kicking themselves and dripping with sweat. Suddenly, a group of strong-backed people rushed out. They came up with fists, kicks, and sandbags.
He punched him wildly with his big fists, and immediately retreated with howling ghosts.
"What are you doing? What's wrong? Why don't you fight? Go ahead, damn it, you bunch of useless snacks. I want you to rush to the door, do you hear me? Your ears are beating mosquitoes, you guys." A sharp voice scolded angrily.
With.
Lin Jue slowly walked out of the theater door with his hands behind his back and stood on the steps. The sun was setting, the heat outside was golden, and the dark crowd of spectators gathered from a distance, pointing and talking. Under the steps,
A young man wearing a fluffy hairpin hat and a bright emerald green gown with his sleeves rolled up and holding a folding fan to fan quickly was looking at him in surprise. That was Lu Tianci.
When Lin Jue recognized him, Lu Tianci also looked at Lin Jue in astonishment and recognized Lin Jue.
"It's that fly again." The little princess frowned.
