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Chapter 1534 Script Forum

Several cases designed in "Accident" are actually not rigorous enough.

There are many elements of luck.

This is probably the reason why in Li Yi's memory, the reputation of this film can only be considered moderate.

Of course, Li Yi actually just found the movie interesting, and it happened to be slightly similar to the young screenwriter's script.

The scene of the symposium on the Chinese Youth Film Screenwriter Support Program.

In accordance with the requirements of the organizing committee, many well-known screenwriters, including Li Yi, will select one or two scripts from the scripts of these young screenwriters and conduct on-site discussions with the young screenwriters to discuss the pros and cons of the scripts and how to

Change the script, etc.

Li Yi chose the script "Insurance Fraud" written by Lin Junfeng, a young screenwriter from the University of Hong Kong.

As the most popular and influential director and screenwriter, Li Yi naturally made his final appearance.

In fact, not only young screenwriters were present, but also many people from other domestic film circles.

Of course Li Yi arrived early in the morning, but he was mostly in the audience, not to mention that the gold medal screenwriters who came this time did indeed have real materials.

Of course, it is also because the organizing committee's requirements for this symposium are relatively targeted, and the discussion is based on a specific script, so there is a lot less empty talk, and the atmosphere is quite warm.

Some people from the film company also came to the scene, and the purpose of their visit was of course self-evident.

Although the scripts written by these young screenwriters are still a little immature, don't they have these gold medal screenwriters acting as script doctors? Therefore, it is conceivable that the scripts selected for on-site discussion will, if nothing else,

They will soon be commercialized and put on the big screen.

Of course, it was Li Yi's symposium that attracted the most attention.

After all, the name of the Tree of Shadows, had the organizing committee not been worried that these capitalists would sabotage it, and stipulated in advance that all participating scripts must retain independent copyrights and cannot be sold in advance. Otherwise, I am afraid that those

The relatively excellent script was already picked up directly.

After all, the price of the scripts of these young screenwriters is definitely not high, and if they can get it in the hands of gold medal screenwriters like Li Yi, especially in the hands of top directors like Li Yi, then it will definitely be a direct success.

The value of the script has doubled several times.

Soon, it was Li Yi's turn.

Everyone sat upright, especially the young screenwriters, who were full of expectations.

Before this, because the organizer had not announced what script each screenwriter chose, including Li Yi's choice, no one knew.

Naturally, everyone was looking forward to it.

You know, the script that Li Yi picked up and presented was enough to make this script and screenwriter instantly become popular.

"Ahem, I've seen the works submitted by everyone. In fact, the creativity is quite good. Is the screenwriter of the script "Insurance Fraud" here?" Li Yi asked with a smile.

In an instant, everyone’s eyes turned to one of the young men wearing glasses, Lin Junfeng, a student from the University of Hong Kong, whose work "Insurance Fraud" was exactly his.

At this moment, Lin Junfeng was completely confused.

He never thought that he would be the lucky one.

Li Yi is very famous in the mainland, but in comparison, in the eyes of young people in Hong Kong, Li Yi can definitely be regarded as one of their most admired idols.

In particular, film practitioners regard Li Yi as the real light of Hong Kong films!

His achievements are too high, and the key is that his experience is too legendary.

In fact, times have been changing. In the early years, everyone admired the stories of grassroots heroes and grassroots counterattacks. However, as time goes by and the times change, there are gradually fewer and fewer grassroots heroes. At the same time, many people understand that grassroots heroes

If you want to counterattack, it is really difficult to cross the hierarchy.

On the contrary, it is Li Yi who gives them a more real feeling. Yes, Li Yi has a good father, but one thing is that Li Yi's father is not the kind of top rich man, he is also a supporting role.

Yes, this status is not low, but it is definitely not high either.

It can be said that there are really many people like this in Hong Kong Island.

And Li Yi's initial failure experience made his success even more legendary.

"Director Li, I'm here!" Lin Junfeng said with a red face.

Everyone else looked at him with envy and jealousy.

"Let's read this script together! Let's talk after reading it!" Li Yi said with a smile.

Soon the staff distributed the printed outline of the script to everyone.

Within a few minutes, the young screenwriters who read the outline of the script were all a little confused, because although this script was just an outline, they could not see what was unique about it.

It can only be attributed to the other party's good luck.

"Lin Junfeng, right? Let's talk about it. How did you come up with the idea of ​​writing such a story?" Li Yi was a little curious.

Others also looked at each other curiously.

It is said that art comes from life, and the birth of any story always has its own context.

"A friend of mine is an insurance broker. He was investigated last year, and the reason is that among the policies he sold, several accident insurance policies were triggered!" Lin Junfeng said.

Everyone was a little surprised.

Li Yi was also a little surprised.

"Of course, in the final investigation, my friend did not have any problems, but this matter made my friend himself suspicious. When we were chatting, he joked that the reason why he was investigated was that the trigger rate of the insurance policy was too high.

It made the company wonder if there was something wrong with his accident insurance policies.

Even he himself felt that what happened to those customers was really strange. Accidents were indeed accidents, but one accident like this, two like this, and accidents happening one after another made it difficult not to doubt whether it was really an accident.

Already."

This chapter is not finished yet, please click on the next page to continue reading the exciting content! "So, I thought about it, what if these accidents are not accidents, but man-made? So this script was born." Lin Junfeng said.

"Art comes from life. This starting point is very good. What about everyone? You have all read the outline of the script. What do you think of the story? You can speak freely." Li Yi said to everyone with a smile.

But everyone looked at me and I looked at you, but no one was the first to speak out.

At this moment, a female screenwriter raised her hand.

"I think the plot of this story is a bit weak?" the female screenwriter mustered up the courage to say.

"Oh? How do you say that?" Li Yi asked noncommittally.

"After I personally read the synopsis of the script, I found that the entire script revolves around the insurance investigator, including his thoughts, suspicions, etc. But in this way, is there such a criminal organization?

existence? How they committed the crime, etc., are not shown. If you watch this movie from the perspective of the audience, I think I may be more interested in how these unexpected cases are created.

.”

"And this story doesn't explain these things, so is there a lot less to watch? Of course, this is just my personal opinion." said the female screenwriter.

"Bah bang bang!" Li Yi clapped his hands.

Others also applauded.

"Is there anything else? In fact, everyone is here today. The symposium is naturally for everyone to discuss together, so we can speak freely. If you say anything, it doesn't matter if you say it wrong." Li Yi encouraged with a smile.

It's actually not uncommon for screenwriters to discuss the merits of scripts, but it's much more common than directors discussing each other's movies.

"I think this story is quite creative. First of all, it is the entry point. It is indeed a novel point to approach it from the perspective of an insurance investigator. Secondly, as an insurance investigator, I don't know what the specific work content of this profession is.

But I think that since you are an investigator, you must first be skeptical about everything.

I think he should have seen more accidents and man-made accidents.

Of course, I don’t know what the reality is, but since it’s a script creation, I think there is no doubt about this.

Therefore, it is a very interesting point how a person who is suspicious of everything will view it when something happens to him.

However, as the classmate said just now, the story is a little interesting!"

Then everyone started discussing it.

Lin Junfeng's mentality is good, because everyone is discussing the matter, and what is being discussed is his script. He is not the kind of famous screenwriter, so naturally he does not have any baggage.

In fact, it was not Li Yi who did this. Several other screenwriters had also discussed the advantages and disadvantages of the script with everyone before.

"Very good, everyone's analysis is very good! Just now a classmate mentioned something, that is, from the perspective of the audience, you will be more interested in how those accidents are created!

When I saw this script story, I suddenly had some inspiration.

First of all, let’s talk about the script of this story. To be honest, from the perspective of a director and an investor, this story has a good idea, but it has little potential!

Because as everyone said, the story is too weak!

The insurance investigator's entry point was good, but he did not investigate the so-called accident in depth! It gave people a feeling of seeing flowers in the fog and looking at the moon in the water.

So, I thought, why not start with the people in the organization that caused the accident?

To this end, I also wrote a short story, which you can take a look at. Of course, it is just an idea at the moment, and the script and story are not perfect, so you can find faults." Li Yi said with a smile.

Everyone was a little surprised, and then they were all a little surprised.

Li Yi's script! It can be said that if it is put on the market and in the film industry, as long as Li Yi's name is attached, no matter how bad the story is, it will directly become popular.

What Li Yi came up with was the synopsis of the movie "Accident".

Of course, there is another point, that is, it is rare to have such an opportunity to criticize Li Yi's script!

Is the story of "Accident" exciting?

Obviously, it is much more exciting than "The Lottery". Although this movie has some shortcomings, it is a highly completed work after all.

Therefore, when the synopsis of the script was sent to everyone, everyone couldn't wait to start reading it.

In fact, Li Yi also has selfish motives. The so-called Three Stooges are better than Zhuge Liang. To be honest, for Li Yi, he thinks this script has many problems.

But he can't give an answer at once on how to make rectifications, so asking these young screenwriters and letting everyone criticize them would kill two birds with one stone, wouldn't it?

Everyone started watching it, including other screenwriters, filmmakers, and investors who came to the scene.

When the name "Accident" appears in everyone's eyes, it instantly makes people feel that it is at least better than the previous script name "Insurance Fraud".

Of course, it may also be because they automatically put on filters.

Soon, the scene became quiet, and Lin Junfeng also looked at it seriously.

He had to admit that Li Yi was Li Yi. Although the story of "Accident" was not perfect, it was obviously much more interesting than his story.

After Li Yi took a few sips of water and saw that everyone had closed the script, he smiled and said: "Come on, let's talk freely. Well, feel free to find faults. In fact, I'm not satisfied with this story. I just want to know how to do it."

Change it, I hope everyone can help me think about it! Well, when the time comes, if it is adopted, we can jointly create this script together."

As soon as Li Yi finished speaking, all the young screenwriters' eyes lit up.

Just kidding, in Li Yi's script, write their names on the signature, what a resume it is, it can be said that the rhythm is soaring.

So everyone began to think hard.

Li Yi was given this opportunity, but whether he could seize it or not depended on whether the opinions they gave were pertinent.

Soon, the first person to raise his hand appeared.

Li Yi was a little surprised, because the person who raised his hand was Lin Junfeng, the screenwriter of "Insurance Fraud".

"Ahem, I'm just speaking a little bit. I'm not saying it well. Please don't take offense to Director Li. In this story, the gang headed by the brain intends to create a murder that seems to be a coincidence. For this reason, every detail must be carefully designed.

, it is undeniable that the design process is indeed a high-intelligence job, but I am thinking that whether it can finally come true is a typical 'people plan, success depends on God', because no matter how good their design is, there is still a decisive factor in their design.

Factors that cannot be controlled." Lin Junfeng said.

Li Yi nodded and signaled him to continue.

"For example, in the case at the beginning of the story, if the victim had closed the driver's window, obviously there would be no further consequences; after the victim was soaked in water, he would most likely have parked the car on the spot or failed to park it.

Under the glass window of the bookstore; further back, the victim is also very likely to just remove the banner from the car instead of tearing the banner down... I mean, the gang that designed the unexpected brain, they can't

Guaranteed, this person will definitely do things as they guessed, so there will be a lot of uncertainties in their design..."


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