Lin Junfeng's words immediately made many people silently give him a thumbs up. Without him, this is Li Yi's script. He dares to ask you and he really dares to say it!
However, Li Yi didn't care about this, and was actually quite happy.
After all, if others don't dare to criticize, what's the point?
The story of "Accident" itself is not perfect. Since it is not perfect, after brainstorming, Li Yi also wanted to try to see if he could make the original story more complete and better.
"Very good, are there any more?" Li Yi asked with a smile.
Lin Junfeng was actually complaining secretly in his heart. If he could, he really didn't want to say it.
But after he said one thing, he stopped talking. He was obviously worried, but Li Yi didn't make it too difficult for him.
Of course, Lin Junfeng made a good start, and someone quickly picked up.
"I think the second murder is a bit strange," said the female screenwriter wearing glasses.
"Oh? Tell me." Li Yi encouraged.
"Actually, I have always been deeply doubtful about flying kites on rainy days. From your description of the story, Director Li, we can see that there was no wind or very little wind that day, and the rain was also heavy. Under such circumstances, there was no run-up.
, can a kite be flown?
And even if it can be flown, how do you control the kite to be hung at a specific position? Even if you do all of this, can you control the direction in which the victim's wheelchair moves?
I think this one has more uncertainty than the first one.
So, I think this method of murder is a bit too complicated?
After all, he is just an old man in a wheelchair. Even if he wants to cause an accident, does he really need to use such a complicated method?"
"Does anyone else have anything to add?" Li Yi nodded and asked again.
Soon another young screenwriter plucked up the courage to raise his hand.
"Tell me about it!" Li Yi called the other party's name.
"They talked about the first two, let me talk about the last one. The last one uses the reflection of the camera, but the reflection of the camera should only cover a certain range, and it has a cycle, that is, in a specific
The time can only be reflected to a certain point, but the time when the vehicle appears is uncertain. It seems unlikely that the two times will coincide, right?
And it was within just a few minutes when Chen Fangzhou was walking on the street?
Secondly, there is the issue of speed. According to the description in your story, Director Li, the road section where the crime occurred is not wide, there are parking lots on both sides, the surrounding area is very lively, there are many pedestrians on the road, it is in a residential area, and there is still a section of road under construction.
, and due to the solar eclipse, many people stopped in the middle of the road. Under such circumstances, how fast can the cars entering this section of road drive, and how fast will they drive?
To take a step back, let’s say that the driver likes to drive fast, but Chen Fangzhou’s wife was wearing a bright red dress at the time and was standing in the middle of the road. She should have seen the driver slow down. But the driver was suddenly flashed back.
I stepped on the brakes and turned the steering wheel, but still hit the female victim, ran her over and collapsed half of the mound. I think it's a bit... unlikely? Any link is wrong?
Problems, it seems impossible for the brain to have the outcome they want."
Not to mention, the criticisms made by these young screenwriters do have some validity.
"So how do you think it should be changed? Or do you have any better ideas?" Li Yi asked with a smile.
"As for the first one, I think it can be understood as having observed the victim's living habits, such as driving without closing the window, having a bad temper, so he would pull the piece of cloth..." A young screenwriter thought.
Want to say.
"Why don't you go upstairs and scold people if you have a bad temper? I think there are too many factors beyond your control."
"I have another opinion. I think it is precisely because of this that it looks more like an accident, because even the implementer has to rely on a lot of luck to achieve the goal. If the plan is well-planned to ensure 100% realization, then it will inevitably cause
Very deliberate.”
"The first one may be that they have studied the victim's habits. For example, they usually track and investigate his living habits and temper, so they can predict the behaviors he will most likely do, which will increase the success rate of their murder; the second
I think the second position for hanging the kite should have been calculated. Of course, I also think it is not easy to fly a kite on rainy days. The third one is indeed what I think Director Li meant. This is indeed an accident, because my brain is not watching TV.
Knowing about the solar eclipse, of course, I think the biggest problem is that the speed of driving should not be that fast, and when everyone can see the solar eclipse with the naked eye!"
"Under that kind of road condition, it's not an emergency. It's unlikely that the vehicle would be traveling at such a speed that it would cause that kind of consequences. Even if you're temporarily blinded, you might not be able to turn randomly. So emergency braking is understandable!"
"Everyone, after you have analyzed so much, I feel that this is the essence of these accidents!" At this time, someone said.
Everyone else looked at him, with inquiry, disdain, and sarcasm in their eyes.
Without him, in the eyes of many people, this person probably wants to flatter Li Yi, right?
The other party did not pay attention to these looks, but said: "First of all, the name of the story is "Accident", so I think that since accidents are used to kill people, there must be a possibility of failure, because there may be
There are many situations, that’s why it’s called an accident. If it’s fatal and it succeeds every time, I don’t think it’s called an accident. People will definitely be suspected!
Of course, I'm not saying that these few successes are clear. I just want to say, can it be set that the accident cases they create do not pursue a 100% success rate? If it doesn't work once, try another one.
A way? Would rather not succeed than let an accident happen?"
"I agree, no matter how many times the victim can escape due to variables, it only takes one accident to kill someone. The previous variables will also cover up the accident and will not expose the murderer. I think if it is designed this way, then this
The gang is the real smart gang!" Someone else quickly expressed support for the other party's opinion.
This chapter is not over yet, please click on the next page to continue reading! Li Yi was very pleased with such a warm atmosphere.
That's right, let everyone discuss it, and there should be an atmosphere of discussion. You don't have to worry about whose script it is, just be realistic and raise it if you think it's unreasonable.
The discussions between these people did give Li Yi some inspiration.
"Ahem, let me summarize. First of all, everyone thinks that luck plays a big part in these unexpected designs, right?" Li Yi coughed twice to interrupt everyone's quarrel.
There was no other way but to interrupt, because everyone started to argue with red faces.
So Li Yi could only speak.
"Yes!" Lin Junfeng and others nodded.
"Let me explain. Regarding these unexpected designs, I am only in the first draft, but regarding the discussion on the element of luck, I think the student at the back said it very well. I think we should add a setting, that is, if
In the first case, they have to observe the client, observe his behavior habits, temper, etc., in order to increase the success rate of judgment and prediction.
But unexpected design cannot be 100% successful. I agree with this. So, can we design it, for example, they have failed before? Or come up with an idea, if it doesn’t work this time, then next time, we would rather be accidental.
If it really "happens", don't deliberately murder it!
Regarding the issue of vehicle speed, I think there may be another setting for this. I don’t have a clue at the moment. You can think about it more. If you have ideas later, you can talk to me directly.
Don't worry, now that I have come up with this script, I think everyone can participate in it." Li Yi said with a smile.
Everyone was a little excited when they heard this.
Because they all heard the implication of Li Yi's words. Li Yi threw out this script and asked them to participate together. So who will be the director? It must be Li Yi himself!
In this way, wouldn't it be possible to ride on Li Yi's coattails? For young screenwriters like them, this is definitely a great road!
"Let's put this question aside for now. Do you have anything to say about the character setting, background, and design?" Li Yi knew that it would be difficult to come up with a result on the spot, so he threw out another question.
New topic.
It was Lin Junfeng who raised his hand immediately.
"First of all, I think the protagonist He Guohui's role is not full enough?"
"How do you say it?" Li Yi asked with interest.
"Because he gives people the impression that he is a killer who causes accidents to seek wealth and kill people. Judging from the description of the script, we want to portray him as a painful person.
He has no emotions and keeps to himself.
I don’t trust anyone, my earned money is neatly piled up, my house is simple, I wear old gray clothes, I don’t smoke or drink, and only the phantom of my dead wife can bring some comfort. Loneliness does not mean that I can’t find someone who loves me, but that I can’t find anyone who loves me.
I can't find the one I love back.
But that's all, so there seems to be no difference between him and those pure murderers and murderers?
To this end, I wonder if we can add some,...such as introducing some psychological descriptions such as redemption of conscience?" Lin Junfeng asked.
"Introducing some psychological descriptions such as redemption of conscience? This idea is quite interesting. Let's talk about it in detail!" Li Yi had actually thought of this, but he certainly wouldn't say it, and instead encouraged it.
"This... the first time I murdered that person, he may not have committed the crime to death, but he still had a way to kill him, and the same was true for the gang boss, but that uncle in the wheelchair, he was innocent, right?
" Lin Junfeng's words also made many people present nod.
Indeed, this is also where He Guohui, the protagonist of this story, feels awkward.
He was upset because his wife died in an accident, thinking she was murdered, but the police determined it was an accident.
And this is one of the reasons that made him embark on this path and become a bit crazy.
However, they continued to murder the innocent old man, which made people feel that he had no humanity and was a complete cold-blooded killer.
This is obvious, as it overturns the previous character set, and makes the accidental death of the previous wife seem to have no meaning.
In fact, this is what Li Yi was thinking about before. Perhaps because of this, such a character seems a bit eclipsed, because he is just an "anti-social" murderer.
Of course, from a legal and moral perspective, he is a cold-blooded murderer, which is understandable.
But from the perspective of movies and artistic creation, this character has lost his "humanity" and is left only with cold blood!
Therefore, Li Yi also wanted to hear Lin Junfeng's opinion.
"I don't know if what I'm thinking is right. For example, can I intersperse some scenes of him rescuing stray cats and dogs? Or, every time he completes a case and receives the reward, he will donate part of it?
Or could it be that when he murdered the innocent old man, he deliberately designed a more variable method? Or could it even be possible that the murder failed and he was relieved?
And then the old man himself died in a real accident?
I wonder if this can add a little drama? After all, accidents are everywhere?"
"The old man didn't die from their man-made "accident", but from a real accident? This is a good idea!" Li Yi couldn't help but his eyes lit up.
I have to say that Lin Junfeng’s proposal is very good.
The old man may be their "failure" case, but he is also an "accidental" success case!
In this way, the word "accident" is revealed more clearly. It is believed that the accidents created can always be predicted, but when the real accident comes, you cannot predict it at all.
"I also think Lin Junfeng's design is good!"
"As for the end, I think it was a bit abrupt when Chen Fangzhou stabbed the brain with a knife to death? Or was the sentence he said a bit abrupt? How did he judge that it was the brain that killed his wife?"
"I think abruptness is the right thing to do. Judging from Director Li's original script, all the deaths in it were done with great effort. Perfect accidents require fantastic imagination, careful settings, the right time and place, and
A tight team operation. Only one death was sudden, and that was the death of He Guohui. This was a real accident, a perfect coincidence, and it was all God's will."
"Or can it be said that it is inner demons at work?
For example, Mr. Huang's suicide was not explained in the script by Director Li, but I think he felt very remorseful when he saw his father die, so he did not give Chen Fangzhou his father's death certificate when he faced him several times. Mr. Huang
After putting the money into the woman's car, he closed the car door with a look of resentment. Later, Chen Fangzhou also said on the phone that Mr. Huang kept crying and saying sorry before he jumped off the building.
Whether you think there is or not, everything is caused by your own inner demons.
Due to the fate of cause and effect, the person who caused the accidental killing was killed directly."
"Bah bang bang bang!" Li Yi couldn't help but clapped his hands. It was right to brainstorm ideas.
At least he gained a lot from it.
Of course, his original plan was to throw out this script and let these young people work together on a second creation to see if they could surpass the original version. If he had some doubts before, now he is really looking forward to it.
