No wonder Li Yi would be suspicious, after all, Chen Wen sprayed too hard.
And the key point is that Li Yi doesn't know how to refute every one of them. In addition, he asked for it himself, so he had to listen to it with tears in his eyes.
But I have to say that Chen Wen, the famous movie kings, are indeed very talented. They can find so many detailed problems directly after reading the script. With this talent, it is no wonder that people have brushed up on various details early on.
kind of awards.
Although I don’t say that I never forget what I have seen, my memory is indeed outstanding.
And others are no less generous.
After all, such an opportunity is rare!
However, Chen Wen was obviously not completely satisfied yet, and quickly continued: "Not only that, but also, your mercenary BOSS here, I didn't know who Dr. Chen was at the beginning, but he took out his photo later, I don't know
Understand, does he know or not?"
"Also, what I cannot understand the most is that when the mercenary you wrote pointed a gun at Dr. Chen, the latter shook his head. I admit that survival is a human instinct. But the other party said that the target was Dr. Chen.
, just arrest him and leave, why are you doing so many tricks? Seeing so many patients and doctors becoming hostages, Dr. Chen should know that he was arrested because he has mastered the virus vaccine, and he will not die. Could it be that he was arrested?
Can't you stand up and go with the mercenaries? You can save so many people, and it's impossible to hide them. Is this script really written by you?"
Chen Wen looked suspicious, and the others also looked at Li Yi with doubts.
Li Yi also scratched his head a little. What the hell, to be honest, he hadn't thought about it that much before, but after such an analysis, it seemed, probably, indeed, maybe, it was really a bit nonsense.
"That's probably it. After all, I just read it once." Chen Wen shrugged.
"Ahem, everyone can speak freely. You can talk about anything." Although Li Yi was repeatedly criticized by Chen Wen, he didn't have much reaction. After all, he really didn't write this script.
It can be said that if you really dig into the details of a popcorn movie, you can indeed find a lot of faults.
There is a saying, and this saying does make Li Yi feel that there is some truth in so many people complaining that this movie is overrated.
"Let me talk about it. I just watched it once, so let me talk about the things I don't quite understand. First of all, in the scene with pirates at sea, here you have Leng Feng jumping into the sea immediately. I don't quite understand.
I understand. The announcement on the ship said that everyone should go into the cabin to take shelter, but the protagonist Leng Feng immediately rushed out and jumped into the sea. Isn't it too abrupt? It seems that he knew that the pirates were coming and he was a special soldier and savior. Is it okay?
Give a process? For example, the protagonist Leng Feng is sleeping, wakes up when he hears gunfire, takes the weapon (rope) that he later used to tie up pirates in the sea, comes out to the side of the ship to see the situation, dodges the bullet, and then gives a close-up of thinking, and then
Would it be more reasonable to jump into the water during a run-up and lay the groundwork?"
Li Yi thought for a while, and this scene from the movie came to mind. There does seem to be something wrong with this.
He recorded it in his notebook again.
"Is there any more?" Li Yi asked again.
"Yes, Leng Feng and his African brothers were drinking, barbecuing and playing football. Why did the rebels and machine guns come all of a sudden? Didn't the rebels fight all the way here? Did they start shooting when they came to the beach? This sudden setting is also
It's too sudden, okay?
Moreover, if this is a war-torn country, the rebels will definitely not start fighting from here, right? Then what I can't understand is, if the rebellion has started, why the protagonists can still talk to each other so calmly,
Eat BBQ?"
"I just think that the attitude of the second-generation son of that factory is very strange. In a foreign country like Africa, when meeting an obvious Chinese like Leng Feng, not to mention fellow countrymen meeting fellow countrymen, my eyes will burst into tears, but I won't hold a gun against Leng Feng.
Your head?" Lin Yunbin couldn't help but ask.
"Let me just say one thing. It is very unrealistic to be shot by a poisonous arrow and fall down without being able to fire. Although we often describe it as blood sealing one's throat, in fact, there is no such thing that can kill people instantly.
Poison arrows? Unless it is a real physical seal, otherwise," military adviser Lin Jianyan couldn't help but say.
Everyone pointed out what they thought was unreasonable one after another, making Li Yi feel a little confused.
Is this really that exaggerated?
Of course, many of them are not that important, but Li Yi knows that if you want to make a good movie, details are really important.
And the story also needs to follow basic logic.
Li Yi had some thoughts of giving up. After all, with so many flaws, if all of them were really changed, it would definitely be a big project.
Especially if more than one Leng Feng is sent, then the whole movie and the plot of the whole story will have to be readjusted.
This is a movie of individual heroism. If other warriors are added to the movie, it will inevitably become an ensemble drama.
Wouldn't that be "Operation Red Sea"?
Compared with "Operation Red Sea", it can be said that there is almost no literary drama from beginning to end. For this kind of movie, Li Yi really may not be able to produce the flavor of the original version.
After all, there are specialties in the art industry. Even if Li Yi had the original version as a reference, it is really impossible to reproduce the original version when shooting this kind of gunfight movie.
"Brother Wen, since you have found so many problems, why don't you give me some ideas to solve them?" Li Yi looked at Chen Wen and said.
"I'm just an actor, okay? I'm not a screenwriter. I'm not a script doctor. Are you asking Yu Blind, okay?" Chen Wen couldn't help but rolled his eyes.
Lin Yunbin intervened and said: "You are worried that sending more people to go to the rescue with Leng Feng will affect the subsequent main plot and the style of the entire movie. I think it is possible to design a way to meet people halfway.
to block the attack, so the others stay to block the pursuers and let Leng Feng go? In this case, wouldn’t it be more reasonable?”
Li Yi also started to think after hearing this.
Not to mention, Lin Yunbin’s suggestion does have merit.
First of all, it is indeed unreasonable to send only one person to fight alone. When people see it, they will think, what’s wrong? We don’t have anyone in the navy anymore?
Therefore, you can send an extra team to go to the rescue with Leng Feng, but as Lin Yunbin said, the movie does not want to become a group show, but to highlight the male protagonist Leng Feng, so this team must be dealt with, such as on the way
When faced with being chased or intercepted, or receiving certain news, but having to intercept and block the enemy, they stayed behind to allow Leng Feng to take the first step.
In this case, the main line of the plot actually does not change very much.
Of course, Li Yi still has to consider comprehensively how to change it.
However, to be honest, he started to give up on the game.
