Well, it’s finally on the shelves…
The initial version of this chapter was published three weeks ago...
Some of this chapter was written a few weeks ago.
As of now, this book has 270,000 words. Let’s talk about this book first.
First of all, I feel that some parts are too obscure, so I will share them with you.
I will try to be as straightforward as possible in what I write next.
Everyone should remember the word spirit and dustless land used by Lu Mingfei at the end of Chapter 2, and the bohemian style dress in Chapter 3, right?
The appearance of the latter is actually a sign of Xia Mi's appearance (who wears long skirts in summer, just think she is not afraid of the heat!)
From here on, Xia Mi began to doubt Lu Mingfei, not only because of Yanling, but also because of other things.
The key point here is that Xia Mi cannot see through Lu Mingfei.
In addition, in Chapter 38, the roller coaster, the original party should know that Xia Mi destroyed the snake in the atrium here because he wanted to test the three Angers. It would be better if he could kill them.
But Xia Mi didn't take action here, not only because Chu Zihang broke through her memory blockade and recalled the past with her, but also because she couldn't see through Lu Mingfei at all, out of fear.
If you want to ask Xia Mi, the proportion of the two.
Then the latter is 99% and the former is 1%.
But the difference between 99 and 1 is just like Chu Zihang's previous idea of completely including his juniors under surveillance.
To put it bluntly, he is tough-talking.
Yes, in the setting of this book, Xia Mi has a crush on Chu Zihang from the beginning. The original book doesn’t say whether he has a crush on him or not. I think he does, so there is Abba Abba in this book.
If any brother wonders why dragons like humans...
Remember InuYasha I mentioned twice? If InuYasha is not enough, then White Snake! (dog head)
From the second chapter, Xia Mi began to suspect Lu Mingfei. In Chapter 52, it was completely a verbal test between the two.
When Xia Mi suspected that Lu Mingfei was there, Lu Mingfei brought out Attila, the previous life of Xia Mi's brother and sister. Xia Mi must have been extremely shocked.
This chapter is full of temptations, such as Xia Mi asking Lu Mingfei if he has a word spirit (she has already witnessed Lu Mingfei's use of Dustless Land).
It's a pity that Lu Mingfei is not the same Lu Mingfei as before.
In this test, he completely had the upper hand, grasping the rhythm of the whole scene without leaking anything, which brought Xia Mi a lot of pressure and doubts.
So Xia Mi lamented in the end that he really couldn’t see through Lu Mingfei emmmm
Perhaps there should be a paragraph about Xia Mi’s psychological activities here, so that it might become much clearer.
In addition, the part about Chu Lu was already mentioned a long time ago.
In addition, Caesar said this in the original text——
If someone would rather reveal his side as a monster than save him, he will immediately side with the monster.
To be honest, both Caesar and Chu Zihang in the original work are quite likable, Long Er’s Chu Zihang and Long San’s Caesar.
Chapter 65 mentioned that Lu Mingfei's extraordinary familiarity and closeness to Chu Zihang had already made Chu Zihang vaguely feel that something was wrong.
This is a truly unbreakable friendship that transcends life and death.
Chu Zihang's previous generosity in the pizza restaurant could be understood as his junior's admiration for him, but as the two got closer and closer, Chu Zihang noticed something was wrong.
The senior brother is so sensitive and smart, but after all, he has not read Qidian.com, does not know the word "rebirth and time travel", and does not have the thinking to transcend the times, so he is destined to not be able to imagine that the junior brother has been reborn.
Unless one day, someone tells him that the power of dragons not only affects the future, but can also interfere with the past.
At that time, Chu Zihang might be enlightened and guess this incredible answer.
In addition, there is also this episode of Eri Tiga Episode 21.
What I want to express here is that Ultraman, who represents justice, will also protect kind and cute little monsters. The definition of good and evil is by no means determined by birth. As the principal said, we cannot choose our birth, but at least we must decide ourselves.
Things to do.
I didn't want Lu Mingfei to tell Eri Yi again, "If Ultraman comes, I will help you beat them away."
Eli Yi also needs to grow up. What Lu Mingfei needs to do is to let Eli Yi get real redemption, from physical disability to inner disability, instead of just protecting her.
The other thing is the direction of the book. The most important things about this book are the two plots.
One is the love line between Chu and Xia (the end of Long Er was too sad)
One is the road-painting emotional line (I am a road-painting party and I have said this for a long time)
Those are the two key points.
There are also some things that I want to say to certain characters, or I want to see the transformation of certain characters.
These two points will be especially obvious in the third line of dragon.
For example, Sakurai Akira, Minamoto Chiaki, Uesugi Koshi...
So you can see, I didn't start writing from Dragon 1.
Firstly, it’s because... Long 1 is the only book I haven’t read yet, and I’ve read Long 23 countless times, so I actually don’t like Old Tang that much (scratching my head)
I feel sorry for the Old Tang True Love Party.
Of course, I didn’t give up on Old Tang either.
Both Old Tang and Constantine will be resurrected in the third line of the dragon. As for whether they will be resurrected as Old Tang or as Norton, this is what Lu Ming insists on letting him decide on his own.
The role played by Old Tang here is quite important, and it will become the "starting point" for an important character to change his fundamental concept.
(It’s a pity that Ye Sheng and Shutoku Aki, I will pray for this couple. If this book can reach the finale, then I will try to save it)
Now let’s talk about settings.
As mentioned at the end of the first chapter, there are actually several versions of Dragon Clan, and there are bugs and conflicts in many settings.
This includes Mr. Fingel's Ice Sea KFC, Chu Zihang's golden pupil whose bloodline issue will never go out, and Chen Motong's mother, so you don't need to get entangled, just go with the version I chose (scratching your head)
There are two assumptions in this book, and Avalon is one of them.
Let’s talk about this plot.
In the original work, Avalon and Odin are connected together.
But in the most popular version of the myth, there is no relationship between these two people...
I happened to have watched the movie "Avalon" by Mamoru Oshii before, and I wrote about it exactly as it was mentioned in the original text.
So I took this as the starting point and constructed the "Baji version" [The stories that Odin and Avalon and Loki and Morgan have to tell]
In addition, this paragraph also sets the stage for Chu Xia. There are many suggestive plots in these chapters. For example, Xia Mi said to Chu Zihang:
"Merlin discovered from the beginning that King Arthur had the mark of the Nibelungs. He knew that King Arthur had been there, and tried to learn more about Morgan through King Arthur, and finally entered Avalon."
I found that I quite like this kind of suggestive chapters, including Beowulf and Wiglaf in the first few chapters.
In the previous battle on the train, I brought out the Presbyterian Church and Jiang Liu.
Jiang Liu was not an important person, he was someone who was deliberately pushed in front of Lu Mingfei in order to tell him something in a subtle way.
There are several forces here -
The Presbyterian Church represented by Li Wuyue.
A hunter website whose moderator ID is nido.
And "Odin" in the Nibelungen (here Lu Mingfei knows that this guy is very likely to be Loki based on his experience in the previous life)
There is also the force represented by Lu Mingze.
These are all secondary designs that have been adapted from the original ones. They do not appear out of thin air, but are present in the original work, whether it is the Council of Elders or the Hunter Website.
Next, let me talk about my views on Lu Mingfei.
Lu Mingfei is a dead child who lacks love, or maybe everyone in the Dragon Clan is a dead child, whether they are senior brothers or Caesar.
Lu Mingze once said: Lu Mingfei, the reason why you don’t feel despair is because there are people who dare not make you despair and always give you some hope little by little like charity...
And this person could be Chen Wenwen, Nuonuo, Ling, Chu Zihang, Hui Liyi, or even Lu Mingze himself.
Lu Mingfei in the original work has actually been resisting and resisting his own growth. In Dragon 3, there is a narration describing the conversation between Lu Mingfei and Fingel.
Fingel asked him how many people have you liked in your life, and Lu Mingfei said two.
Fingel smiled coldly, if you liked the second girl, how sure are you that you won't like the third girl?
The third is compared to the second, just as the second is compared to the first.
You can like the second girl, why can't you like the third girl?
Classic nesting doll.
Fingel also said here: This is just your refusal to admit that the future you will be different from the present you.
Lu Mingfei didn't want to change, but he had to change.
In my opinion, Lu Mingfei has truly grown up, and the real change should be from "wooing" to "giving love".
It's like a reincarnation.
From longing to be loved, to giving love to others.
This is the sign of his true growth.
In this book, I want to write about Lu Mingfei, who has experienced everything personally, reached the end, understood everything, and finally ushered in growth and transformation.
He still talks nonsense.
But he would never hesitate again.
He will still have Bloodmourne.
But he knows where his friends are.
He will truly understand what responsibility is and what love is, and move from the realm of "wooing" to "giving love."
In fact, he may not have figured out how to handle certain things yet.
Because his last life ended so hastily, he never thought about how he could reverse his destiny if he could do it again.
So in this life, he is moving along the established path, not only reflecting on the choices he should make at the fork in the road, but also thinking about many issues that he missed in the previous life.
He will love life more and cherish the days with his friends.
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That’s it for now, I don’t know what to say anymore emmmm
Finally, please make your first order!
To be honest, the current performance of this book is not very good (scratching my head)
It was put on the shelves at 270,000 yuan because it was so bad in the early stage. It was only tested at 150,000 yuan and above. I still remember that this book only had two reviews at 80,000 words.
As of today, it has just over 4,000 collections, and the actual number of readers is less than one-tenth. After it is released, it is estimated that the number of subscriptions will be more than 200 at best. There are indeed not many people who will read it.
So this book won't be too long.
What can I say? Firstly, I personally tend to be a feedback-oriented author. Sometimes after carefully writing a good plot, I will keep checking the background after sending it out to see if any brother has praised me...
I would like to express my special thanks to all the friends who voted and rewarded!!!
After all, those who are willing to vote or reward must think my book is pretty good!
Second, enthusiasm will eventually be worn away. This is quite realistic. I know this very well. This year is the graduation season. After the interview, I will go to another place for internship next Monday. I don’t know when I will stabilize.
, life is not stable yet, so I dare not talk about how much electricity it can generate.
In fact, I thought about it before I started the book.
What if the book gets poor grades?
What should I do if I keep playing alone?
I had thought about issues like this before I started the book, so the goal I set for myself was the second line and the third line, which are the two things I want to write most.
I like these two couples very much, so I am also willing to send energy for their love.
In addition, I still have something to say to the characters in the original work, such as Minamoto Chisei and Uesugi Koshi.
So you don’t have to worry, this book will be completely written about saving Eri, and the third line of Ryuu will be completed.
I have roughly thought about the ending scene of Dragon's Third Line, and the biggest climax of this book is this scene.
As for Long San, it will just be a continuation. It will depend on the situation at that time.
(I placed this part of Odin’s plot in Long Er, which is what comes next)
The initial estimate is around 70,80w.
This book is already over a third of the way through.
At present, the shortcomings of this book are quite obvious. The main ones are, ahem, I am not very good at this fighting scene. There are many dialogues, which may be a bit dry. I will try my best to make up for this aspect.
To give you another shot, my coding speed is really slow. For me, it takes about 3 or 4 hours to write a 4k chapter a day, and it takes even longer to write. After all, sometimes it takes me a long time to look up the original information (face covering)
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As a hobby, 4 hours a day is already the limit. When I start the internship, I will basically take a break after work, and the rest of the time will be spent writing this book.
Defending my internship thesis and preparing for the exam in May, I am really a bit busy...
I will try my best to keep it updated, and you don’t need to worry about me being a eunuch. This book has the power to generate electricity for love.
In addition, if it is really too late, I will not update it in a hurry. This book has no grades. I don’t want to lose quality. I still want to write a high-quality fanfiction.
Finally, let me give you a vaccination, this book is hehehehehehehehehehehehe!
Just say important things a few times (dog head)
It is expected to be a 10,000-word update to be released tomorrow (already squeezed out)
In addition, this chapter has 3,000 words, so let’s call it 13,000 words!
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This chapter has been completed!