【happy family】
Xu Manying: "(crying) working overtime."
Wu Wenyue: "Eating out and communicating with colleagues, @李 Peifeng, are you coming?"
Li Peifeng: "Don't go, write code, don't drink, wait for you to go home."
Wu Wenyue: "Okay, I'll bring you some food when I go back."
After sending his parents away, Li Peifeng returned to his apartment, concentrating on typing and replying briefly to messages on his mobile phone. He didn't even agree to Wu Wenyue's dinner invitation. Instead, he casually ate the bread Xu Manying bought and sat in front of the computer to continue writing a book.
He has already accumulated 50,000 words in the manuscript of the book "The Female Queen", and is updating it steadily at 4,000 to 5,000 words a day, and coding another 10,000 words every day, maintaining a good momentum of growth in the manuscript.
Li Peifeng plans to write another 200,000 words to complete the book and devote himself to writing a new book.
In fact, most of his current thoughts are also on the new book, otherwise the heroine would not be able to write only 10,000 words a day, or at least double it. However, the progress of the new book is still slow, and it can even be said that the progress is zero.
After establishing the new book project, Li Peifeng wrote multiple outlines, but they were all rejected. After communicating with Zhao Qingge, he changed his ideas again and again. In the end, he didn't know how to write the book, what kind of writing style, and what kind of story he should tell.
Now he only has one folder, which contains a document of 300,000 words, a few pictures and a few tables, including Narnia's world map, history and humanities and other details.
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"I'm a waste."
Li Peifeng sat in front of the keyboard and stared blankly at the computer screen. He stayed idle for two and a half hours from 5 pm to 7:30 pm. In the end, he could not code a single word, so he came to this conclusion.
"I'm such a waste!"
Li Peifeng shook his head and sighed. He could describe his current mental state in one sentence. His mind was full of sexy ideas, but every idea had a reason why he couldn't write it down. He had too many worries and couldn't write.
At first, he just wanted to write casually, simply in a cool way, and use a relaxed way to copy the things in his dreams.
The male and female protagonists use themselves and Zhao Qingge as prototypes, and the two of them travel into another world for adventure. When the time comes, they will add two elf beauties and demon beauties as harems to make up for the regret of not being able to hug each other in the dream...
But not long after, Li Peifeng felt that it was a pity to write like this, ruining such a colorful and real world. He was sorry for his time-travel experience, and his ambitions were inflated, so he changed his mind again.
Li Peifeng wanted to write it as a serious fantasy novel, hoping to make this work jump out of the online literary circle, use this book to build a bridge between popular and serious literature, weaken the creation of cool points, focus on the magnificence and majesty of the world background of the novel, and depict the subtle
With its plot layout and complex human nature, the entire story is comparable to "The Three-Body Problem".
For this reason, Li Peifeng even drank the perfume alone and traveled through it again in his dream, deliberately remembering more details of the different world, which is what the system calls the 'DQ01 Magical Plane'.
As far as world history, there are forty-five countries in the entire plane with different national systems, political ecology, currency systems, power distribution, social structure, geographical environment, power and language systems, folk customs and habits in different regions, and even language accents...
Wait, wait, etc. I almost remembered it in the second dream, and Li Peifeng finally started typing on the keyboard to write the world structure in the book.
But the more he wrote, the more confused he became.
"Maybe it will pounce!"
"It might be a disaster!!"
"You will definitely be miserable. If you really want to write, I suggest you change your vest and switch to male videos and play retro. I think you just started to be willful after eating for two days."
The above are the exact words Li Peifeng said to his editor Xia Sheng after he told him about his idea for a new book.
It's cold and heartless, but it's really good intentions. In fact, Li Peifeng, as an online article author and a person who studies online articles, also understands the truth very well.
The business system of online novel serialization determines that the more precise and better the writing of a novel, the more profitable it will be.
For example, movies like "The Three-Body Problem", "A Song of Ice and Fire", "The Lord of the Rings", "The Hobbit", "Harry Potter", and even "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty"
"Wait a minute, can these best-selling books that have been adapted into movies and TV shows really achieve good results if they are serialized on the Destination website?
Ninety-nine percent of the time it's impossible.
More than ten years ago, Dingmin launched a project. It paid heavily to invite 30 traditional writers at the chairman and vice-chairman level of each state's writers' association to post their works for serialization on the website. It also invited Huang Yi, Han Han, and Xiao Guo at a high price.
Waiting for them to publish their books at the end point, the site provides considerable publicity for these well-known writers.
As a result, they all rushed to the street.
Without exception, they all rushed to the street.
Since then, people in the industry have finally recognized the fact that online literature is not only not equal to serious literature, nor is it equal to popular literature, it is not even the same thing as literature in the era of the traditional publishing industry.
Online novels are a kind of fragmented reading. Compared with traditional novels, the nature of online novels is more like "storytelling". There is a paragraph every day, each paragraph has buttons, and the characters and plot come first.
Only in this way, after people have listened to one section today, they will want to listen to the next section tomorrow. There are buttons in the story that will make you feel itchy.
As for worldview?
What is a worldview?
Readers of online articles come to read simple and lively stories that can relax the mind, not to think carefully about the changes in the characters' inner joys and sorrows in the book, and to appreciate the powerful world structure depicted in the book.
Let's go and listen to those popular storytelling, "Liao Zhai", "Sui and Tang Dynasty", "Three Heroes and Five Righteousness". Which storyteller can tell you how detailed the world in them is?
It has been introduced in one or two mouths, and there is no need to even tell them. These stories are based on historical structures, and the audience will understand them clearly. They are basically the same.
"Pa~"
The teacher slapped the tree on the high platform and said: "Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors of morality, fame after Xia, Shang and Zhou..."
After finishing the opening poem, the teacher continued: "Today, we will tell a story about Little Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf. I can't remember the specific dynasty. I probably remember that around the Northern Song Dynasty, there was such a family.
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Just two simple sentences, and then it’s time to talk about the protagonist. If you don’t talk about the protagonist and push the story forward, it will just be nonsense, and the audience in the audience will not reward you.
In the same way, if online novels focus too much on the depiction of the worldview, the author is asking for trouble.
There's nothing I can do about it. Today's online articles are becoming more and more like Douyin songs. You only need to listen to the chorus part. As for the whole song, there is no need to start or end it. It's just fun.
But Li Peifeng has ambitions, and if he wants to get this book out of the online literary circle, he has to ask for trouble.
He had to spend pen and ink to depict the details of the magic plane of DQ01, to bring out the complete framework of the dream world, and to bring out those characters and stories, so that readers can glimpse the vivid impression of every creature in that world from the words.
Like, readers can feel the real hustle and bustle of that absurd world with a long history, magic and technology coexisting.
Moreover, if Li Peifeng doesn't explain things about the other world clearly, readers won't be able to understand it.
Just speaking of the power system in it, science and magic go hand in hand, but the physical rules and the plane where Li Peifeng is located are different. Most extraordinary powers are mage, warrior, and ranger, but what is needed to advance to extraordinary is not to fight monsters and upgrade.
Instead, work hard to cultivate yourself.
For details on how to practice Qigong, you can refer to Qigong practice methods. In short, it is mysterious and mysterious.
In addition, the ranger may not be holding a bow and arrow, but it may be an AWR-76 sniper rifle. And maybe he can throw the gun away and pull out a tomahawk from the void with his left hand. He holds the staff in his right hand and can unleash a dog on a command.
you!
That's right, DQ01's power system is so chaotic, so chaotic that it's so real that Abbas, a perfumer who makes perfumes, can do magic, so nothing is impossible.
Looking at the races in the world, there are humans, elves, orcs, and dragons in DQ01 that appear more frequently in fantasy works. The appearance and habits of the races are similar to what people imagine. But there are also sea dwellers, monsters, dwarves, and Nords.
It has never appeared in fantasy works, or even if it does appear, it is a completely different race from what people imagine.
In the DQ01 plane, although dwarves are short, they have a gentle temper and careful thinking. They do not have a strong beard on their faces. They are gentle and have the image of a scholar, and they often appear as scientists.
The Nords are plant life forms in human form. They are tall and have no eyes. They use the surrounding plants and mind power to perceive the world. They are immortal, proud, and like to explore. Most of the professions of this race are farmers or explorers.
By the way, each race has its own branch of the power system...
"It's difficult, there are too many things. According to Lao Zhao and his own ideas, it is written according to the traditional Western fantasy novels, that is, using POV multi-line narrative, deep background, detailed environment, all-encompassing, the hatred of the country and the family in the whole world
, love and killing among various races, various political intrigues, and grand narrative arrangements. This is difficult to write and difficult to read, but the story is deep, easy to promote, and has a strong epic feel. The disadvantage is that the market acceptance rate is about
It’s going to go lower.”
"If you consider commerciality and create rhythm and routines, you are destined to abandon this part. The balance between the two is really difficult to grasp!"
Li Peifeng sighed again and looked at the time. It was already half past eight in the evening, and there was still no word on the screen.
So, he decided to write something to show that he had not wasted his time...
"All beginnings are hard."
"It's hard in the middle."
“It’s difficult until the end!”
"Write a book? What kind of book can I write? I don't have this ability, you know right?!"
"Signed for platinum? What happened to signing for platinum? After signing for platinum, I won't be able to write anymore. I have millions of dollars in manuscripts sitting in my bank account! How can I have the motivation to write a book? I am nothing, I am nothing!"
"
Well, that’s cool.
Li Peifeng finished his work and quit the coding software with satisfaction, logged into TT, and thought about asking book friends to recommend a few movies to watch and look for inspiration.
"Ahem~"
There were quite a lot of messages, so Li Peifeng clicked on them directly. In addition to the group chat, a dialog box called "Yun Xin Yue Xing" popped up. The message from the other party was sent ten minutes ago.
Yun Xin Yuexing: "How is the new writing?"
Is it better to say ‘just the same as before’?
If saying 'nothing has been moved' would seem like I'm a bit slack, I've obviously been thinking very hard.
Li Peifeng felt a little guilty, and typed on the keyboard to reply. As soon as he typed two words, he suddenly felt something was wrong...
Zhao Qingge, Teacher Zhao, it is normal for him to know that I am writing a new book. You, Yun Xinyuexing, are my wife on the Internet. How did you know that I was also writing a new book? I never told you.
"You've exposed yourself and haven't realized it yet, have you?"
After thinking for a moment, Li Peifeng decided not to answer the message, just in case the conversation broke out. The two of them knew who each other was, and he was not sure whether Zhao Qingge could still date him online under a mask.
But now that it's online and people have sent messages again, it wouldn't be good if I didn't say anything...
One or two things in the world: "Look at your breasts. I want to see my wife's breasts today."
This chapter has been completed!