At 12:30 p.m., Li Peifeng returned home. He received the documents from Lu Jing and Lin Zhihui in his e-mail, but he did not read them. Instead, he kept writing and finished the last point of the novel outline of "Sword and Law".
, and sent it to the editor Xia Sheng who had been urging the manuscript.
To this day, he has basically clarified and straightened out the main characters and the storyline of "Sword and Law". If there is anything left unfinished, there are only small details that need to be improved a little bit, but he does not plan to
I continued to write down the outline in detail, but went directly to the main text.
In Li Peifeng's opinion, if you work out a detailed outline in advance that is clear about the plot of each chapter, although it is not easy to get stuck when writing the main text, it is easier to limit the author's improvisation, and the reading will be less passionate.
Sometimes, as the author is writing and writing, he suddenly feels that another plot direction is more reasonable and natural, and the original idea is naturally invalid.
And this kind of situation is very easy to happen in an online novel with two to three million words. Not to mention that some authors just want the dumplings filled with jealousy. If the dumplings don’t sell well, they will run away in advance.
You won’t waste time writing detailed outlines.
Therefore, in most cases, writing detailed outlines is a waste of time and puts a seal on yourself.
Many online article authors don't write detailed outlines of hundreds of thousands of words. They just set the tone of the world setting, upgrade system and plot direction, and then start writing, accumulating hundreds of thousands of saved manuscripts and publishing them directly.
I code 18,000 words every day, figure out the plot for the next day in advance, continue coding the next day, figure out what to write for the third day before going to bed, and then push it forward bit by bit.
This is especially true for successful master authors. For them, asking them to write a detailed outline is like asking the chef of a five-star hotel to write down the steps of cooking before cooking.
They have written countless successful works and created tens of millions of words in total. Their minds are equipped with all kinds of familiar web writing ideas, characters, plots, and they can be picked at their fingertips.
Some great masters don’t even talk about detailed outlines, they can’t even write outlines...
Toad: "I never write an outline!"
Squid: "My settings are extremely detailed, but I don't do much preliminaries for the plot."
Mao Ni: "My outline has everything determined. I think of some of my favorite scenes in advance, and then arrange the plot to come out."
Dancing: "Just define the important main lines in the outline, and then think about the really small progress after writing them down."
One or Two Styles in the World: "I built a perfect stage, a magnificent and delicate world. I also portrayed 'characters' with flesh and blood and stories. The 'story' came out naturally. It was not in my mind.
It’s just in the character’s mind, and it would be cliché to write it out. It’s better to keep it a bit mysterious and give me something to look forward to.”
"Is this your reason?"
Xia Sheng: "(sweating) Is this why the document you sent me only has 8,000 words? This is what you have accomplished in more than a month? Apart from the character setting, there are only a few sentences that really involve the plot.
It’s less than 900 words. With such a huge world background, if you do this, are you sure you can write it well?”
One or two things in the world: "I have written everything I want to talk about in each volume. It is not necessary to be too detailed. Editor, you don't want to be spoiled by me, right?"
Xia Sheng: "Don't act poor. I just think this thing is not proportional to the 700,000-word world structure you wrote before."
One or Two Winds in the World: "Those 700,000 words are actually considered an outline. If you think so, do you think I am not dedicated enough?"
Xia Sheng: "...it's true."
One or two trends in the world: "So when my book is released, please give me more recommendations, brother!"
Xia Sheng: "Don't worry, there will be some. But you need to code out the 30,000-word text first. The female channel you have been writing for so long suddenly changed to a male channel. I can't see the text and I don't know how to fight for resources for you.
.And the writing style of your "Sword and Law" is very different from the online articles on the market. I'm really afraid that you won't be able to grasp it."
One or two things in the world: "I'll try my best."
In fact, Xia Sheng is right. Li Peifeng's transformation of writing style is very difficult. Because he has greater ambitions. Not only does he want "Sword and Law" to become a bridge-level work between online literature and traditional literature, but he also wants to use it to create a better world.
Make a fortune.
Having just transferred more than two million yuan to his mother Yu Huizhi, Mr. Li's wallet suffered heavy losses, and his desire to make money became stronger. Naturally, his attitude towards the creation of this book was extremely serious and cautious.
Not only for commercial reasons, he completely gave up the idea of self-pleasure, just to present the dream world. He also scrapped four beginnings, totaling 170,000 words, and refreshed them before "Sword and Law" was officially written.
The highest number of words in a scrapped manuscript to date.
Yes, Li Peifeng has written many beginnings, but after finishing them, he was not satisfied and scrapped them one after another. However, this was not in vain. In the process, he polished his writing skills little by little. Maybe next time
Typing on the keyboard is the real beginning of the story of "Sword and Law"...
"But not this time."
Looking at the blank document in front of the screen, Li Peifeng sighed and looked at the time. It was already three o'clock in the afternoon. He had been sitting in front of the screen for more than two hours, with no idea, no progress, and his mind was dizzy.
Li was thinking about drinking some perfume at night and dreaming to find inspiration, but it was still daytime, and daydreaming was not good, so he simply read the articles sent by the two junior sisters. At this time, his head became bigger.
"You two should really make trees in your next life!"
Li Peifeng shook his head, revising and revising. Another two hours passed in a hurry. After revising two articles, he had just sent them to Lu Jing and Lin Zhihui when the doorbell rang.
…
"Have you thought about what to cook for me?"
The visitor was none other than Huang Tianxuan, who was here for dinner. He was no longer wearing a white coat, but a camel coat, a pair of black tight jeans on the lower body, and a pair of black over-the-knee boots.
Huang Tianxuan took off her coat, revealing the white sweater she wore underneath, which showed her S-shaped figure and her chest. Moreover, the shirt was slim and thin, and the underwear buckle was faintly visible.
"You eat what you do."
Li Peifeng took a pair of slippers from the shoe cabinet and gave them to her, and said casually: "I bought some vegetables and lamb chops for lunch, grill some lamb chops, stir-fry some vegetables, and make some soup... Do you drink?"
"No more drinking. The driver is on leave today and I will drive by myself."
Huang Tianxuan leaned over and took off her boots. Although the over-the-knee boots look good and make her legs look longer, their shortcoming is also obvious, that is, they are difficult to take off. There are thin shoelaces at the top, and there is a zipper after untying the shoelaces.
The knees extend all the way to the ankles, the boots are very tight, and the zipper cannot be opened at once.
Huang Tianxuan bent over and worked on it for a long time, but could only unzip one boot halfway, and the zipper was stuck.
"You sit on the sofa and I'll help you."
Li Peifeng couldn't bear to see how hard she was doing it, and he couldn't hold back his helpful heart, but Huang Tianxuan stood up and smiled half-heartedly: "Are you taking off my shoes for me, or do you want to take advantage of me?"
"Are you just making such malicious assumptions about me?"
Li Peifeng said with a sarcastic face: "Forget it, your big feet will be stifled after wearing these boots for a whole day. They will definitely stink. In order to avoid polluting the air in my house, just don't take them off and just wear them like this."
"You have stinky feet!" Huang Tianxuan rolled her eyes, sat on the sofa and crossed her legs: "Take them off."
[I’m a little panicked. As soon as I walked in, my stinky brother wanted me to take off my shoes. Is it time to take off my clothes next?!]
Li Peifeng smiled inwardly and did not want to scare her on purpose. He quickly helped Huang Tianxuan take off her boots, revealing two pairs of feet wearing sports socks. Moreover, with his keen sense of smell, there was not much strange smell...
"I always change into sneakers when I'm working in the lab."
Huang Tianxuan seemed to be explaining. After that, she put on her slippers and stood up and said, "Let's cook. I'll help you. Finish it quickly and eat quickly. I'm really hungry."
"Okay, then you wash the vegetables first, and I'll make the lamb chops."
The two had a clear division of labor and got busy in the kitchen. She washed vegetables and he cut meat, she cooked while he grilled steaks. There was warmth in the calmness. Although the two of them were just flirting with each other, they didn't break their relationship.
, but at this time it is really like a couple living together.
However, Huang Tianxuan has never cooked much, and she can wash vegetables. However, it is very difficult to actually help in the kitchen. She can't even cut vegetables, so she is a little confused.
Li Peifeng glanced at the unevenly sized potato pieces on the cutting board and commented: "The pieces are a bit big, and your technique of holding the knife is wrong."
"You come?"
"I teach you."
So, Li Peifeng stood behind Huang Tianxuan, hugging her by the ears and temples, and began to teach her how to chop vegetables.
"When holding a knife, your index finger and thumb are on both sides and heel of the knife respectively, and the other three fingers naturally hold the handle. Do you understand?"
"Um."
"Come on, follow my example and give it a try."
Li Peifeng put his chin on Huang Tianxuan's shoulder and whispered in her ear: "Relax your hands, yes."
"~"
Huang Tianxuan lowered her head, her face slightly red: "Please keep it away from my butt!"
Li Peifeng was unmoved and instead emphasized his tone: "Chop the vegetables carefully and don't think too much!"
"Who is thinking nonsense?" Huang Tianxuan gritted her teeth and tried to turn around, but found that Li Peifeng had already kissed her...
Is that cutting vegetables?
That’s talking about love!
In winter, the days are long and the nights are short. Outside the kitchen window, the world is no longer clear, and the sun and moon are no longer shining.
A man and a woman jointly pressed the potato to pieces on the cutting board. If it could speak, its first sentence would be: 'You two bitches, please give me a good time!'
Perhaps God couldn't bear that Tudou was hurt physically, but he was also tortured mentally, and the accident happened!
"Dingling bell~~"
"Your cell phone is ringing..."
Huang Tianxuan panted slightly and pushed Li Peifeng away: "Answer the phone first."
I don’t want to pick it up!
Although Li Peifeng hadn't seen who the caller was yet, he had a hunch that something might happen if he answered the call. However, he still took out his phone and took a look. Sure enough, the caller was Zhao Qingge.
"Your mentor?"
Huang Tianxuan said in a subtle tone: "Aren't you going to answer?"
Li Peifeng made a silent gesture, and then chose to answer the call amid hesitation.
"Are you at home?"
Hearing the first question from the guide, Mr. Li's heart tightened again: "Yes, at home."
"have you eaten?"
"...is cooking."
"I still want to talk to you about the project. Should I go to your house?"
Li Peifeng glanced at the girl who was staring at him in the kitchen. He had thousands of thoughts in his mind, and finally said: "Okay, you can come, but Huang Tianxuan is also here. She came here to discuss with me... the progress of drug research and development,
So I will eat here too.”
It is completely undesirable to lie that you are not at home, or to go out to eat with Lao Zhao. Li Peifeng is also tired of it. After all, he is a man who wants to have a dream. He has been avoiding the meetings of several girls. He is hiding his ears and pretending to be an ostrich. He does not face the problem directly. Naturally,
Nor can we talk about solving the problem.
But when it comes to Huang Tianxuan being in his own family, he has to find a reason to explain it away. He can't be too straightforward, and both parties will have no way to go down...
Perhaps Li Peifeng made a good excuse. Zhao Qingge was silent for a moment, not angry, but asked: "What kind of drug research and development? Is it the one you gave me before?"
"right."
"I'll be there in a moment."
The call was hung up, and Li Peifeng was a little confused. This seemed to be the first meeting between Zhao Qingge and Huang Tianxuan after the five of them woke up from a dream. He didn't know if there would be any sparks in the friction.
"You still have that medicine? And you gave it to her?"
Huang Tianxuan's eyes widened, and she subconsciously stepped back half a step to distance herself from Li Peifeng, and said in a confused and disdainful tone: "You actually gave your mentor a meal?"
Li Peifeng wasted a lot of words before Huang Tianxuan understood that [Jiujiu Guiyuan Gujing Strengthening Pills] and [Peiyuan Pill] were not the same medicine. Fortunately, after Li Peifeng distributed [Peiyuan Pill] to the three girls
I saved some, even though I take it occasionally these days, I still have about a hundred pills left.
"I'll give you all this medicine. Take it and take it. It can beautify your skin, strengthen your body, cleanse your marrow and cut your bones. Treat the sick and strengthen your body. Alas, I made another decision that went against my ancestors..."
This chapter is not finished yet, please click on the next page to continue reading the exciting content! Huang Tianxuan did not listen to Li Peifengshen's nagging, took the transparent plastic bottle, put it in front of her eyes and looked at the black pills inside, and said hesitantly: "Where are you?
So many weird medicines?"
"Don't ask, just ask and the gods will give it to you."
"Then this god is really blind!"
Huang Tianxuan begged and understood the true meaning of what Li Peifeng had just said to Zhao Qingge. Saying that she came to his house to discuss drug development was just a lame excuse to cover up, but this drug...
"Are you sure you can eat it? What are its specific effects?"
"You will know after you try it. In fact, the specific effect is similar to what I just said."
After Huang Tianxuan asked about the dosage, she took a glass of water and immediately took one pill. Her face suddenly became rosy and radiant, but her expression was one of shock. Her open mouth could probably fit a small apple...
"Is it caffeine? Epinephrine? Or modafinil? What are the side effects?"
"There are no side effects. I don't know the specific ingredients. You can test it yourself."
Li Peifeng waved his hand and said: "But keep it secret. If it can be produced, that would be the best. Remember to give me a share of it."
Huang Tianxuan was not too happy, so she poured another pill from the bottle, put it on the tip of her nose and sniffed it carefully, then frowned: "Is it still a Chinese patent medicine? It's difficult to develop."
"Regarding the research and development of that Dali Pill, do you know how much manpower and material resources I have invested now? At least 8 million, but it is still in the process research stage. My brother and my dad asked about this matter and politely suggested that I put this project
Stop it, because it is really a bottomless pit and more difficult than innovating Western medicine."
Li Peifeng sighed: "It's a pity that I lost my medicine and was cut into pieces and sacrificed in vain... If it really doesn't work, don't try the Peiyuan Pill. Keep it for yourself. It can really beautify and delay aging."
Huang Tianxuan nodded noncommittally, looked at the pills with less than a fifth left, and asked, "Did you also give this medicine to Zhao Qingge? How much did you give her?"
"As many as you, these are specially reserved for you."
Huang Tianxuan curled her lips secretly: "Where are Wenyue and Man Ning? Did you give them to them too?"
"you guess?"
"I knew it wasn't just for me!"
Li Peifeng retorted: "I gave you a chance, but you didn't use it. I only gave you one pill to strengthen your body. Have you come up with something? Are you still reasonable now?"
Huang Tianxuan looked angry: "Drug research and development takes time. One or two years is a short time. I told you before, do you remember?"
"Remember, remember... pick up the bowls quickly, it's for three people."
"I won't help you, you can do it yourself."
Huang Tianxuan folded her arms in front of her chest, with an unhappy look on her face: "We agreed that we would have dinner together, and you invited Zhao Qingge to come. It would be magnanimous of me not to leave directly now."
"Then I really want to thank you sister."
Li Peifeng was defeated and stopped arguing with her. He picked up the bowl and served it to the table. Huang Tianxuan kept her promise and stopped helping the cook. She turned around and walked to the sofa in the living room to sit down.
[I'm so angry, I'm really angry, I want to hit someone! Even if I did all kinds of evil in my previous life, I should pay off my debt when I meet this kind of dog man!!]
【No! I want to cause trouble!!】
Li Peifeng put down the tableware, his heart moved, and he subconsciously looked at Huang Tianxuan, only to see that she was picking up her mobile phone to make a call, and the call seemed to have been connected...
"Yueyue, what are you busy with?"
Huang Tianxuan acted as if there was no one around, sitting on the sofa with her legs crossed elegantly, her tone was very casual: "Oh, I just finished shooting the video? Didn't you have dinner?!"
"..."
"Come to Peifeng's house for dinner. I'm here too. Professor Zhao will be here soon."
"..."
"What's the matter? It's okay. We just want to eat and chat together. Are you coming?"
"..."
"Ok, I will wait for you."
"..."
After hanging up the phone, Huang Tianxuan looked at Li Peifeng with a slightly apologetic smile: "I still need to trouble you, go pick up the bowls again, it's for four people."
Li Peifeng was expressionless: "What do you mean? Do you think it's not fun enough for three people to eat?"
"I think four people are a bit small."
Huang Tianxuan fiddled with her phone and chuckled: "If Man Ning hadn't gone on a business trip, I would have even called her."
Li Peifeng frowned and stood there as if thinking.
"What are you doing standing still?"
Huang Tianxuan reminded her thoughtfully: "Hurry up and pick up the bowls. We need to make more dishes. There are two more people. If there is a quarrel because there is not enough food, Yueyue picks up the kitchen knife and wants to eat the stir-fried Li Peifeng. Then I will not stop him.
Yo~"
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