"Oh my God, my earth, you are finally here!"
On December 15th, in Shanghai, in the office of the female channel editorial department and the gold medal editing studio of the terminal group, Xia Sheng was sitting at the computer desk and was overjoyed, looking at the TT dialog box with 'One or Two Winds in the World'
, operated the mouse with some excitement, and chose to download a document called "The First Draft of Sword and Law" sent by the other party.
It has been more than a month since 'Human Yiliangfeng' sent him the outline of "The Chronicle of Sword and Law". During this period, Xia Sheng made countless draft reminder calls, and now he finally received the beginning of the text of this novel.
It is so urgent, not only because the author "One or Two Winds in the World" is platinum and needs to be paid attention to, but also because the outline of "Sword and Law" is so exquisitely written that Xia Sheng can't help but expect too much.
In fact, he is not the only one. Many male channel editors who have read the outline of "Sword and Law" occasionally ask when the book will be completed, and want to take a quick look at "One or Two Styles in the World", the platinum female channel editor.
Whether transformation is a success or a success, and whether the main text is worthy of the grand outline.
"Looking forward to the stars and the moon, we finally get to see the true face of Mount Lushan!"
"I hope you can write brilliantly, otherwise... you go back and continue writing female videos!"
All kinds of thoughts flashed through Xia Sheng's mind. The document was downloaded and opened automatically. The dense text was displayed on the screen. The magnificent world shown in the outline of "Sword and Law" also revealed an iceberg in Xia Sheng's mind.
A corner.
This article started with 50,000 words and the first draft of sixteen chapters was written over several days after Li Peifeng and Huang Tianxuan had a dream.
During that dream communication, Li Peifeng's main purpose was to create an intimate relationship with Huang Tianxuan in the dream, but this goal was not achieved smoothly.
Because after Huang Tianxuan fell into the dream, she wanted to devote herself wholeheartedly to learning; explore the origin of magic energy in the other world, study the strange phenomena and laws in the universe through the technology of the other world, distinguish the differences between the physical rules of dreams and reality, and analyze
Are the two planets on parallel planes or in the same universe?
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In short, Dr. Huang has continued his scientific research spirit in reality into dreams, and his biggest wish is to influence or change himself in the real world through dreams. As for the emotional entanglement with Li Peifeng, Huang Tianxuan does not attach much importance to it.
This attitude of the other party also affected Li Peifeng, who had no choice but to become like-minded comrades with Huang Tianxuan and study science and mysticism in other worlds together.
In other worlds, scientists must be mages, and mages must be scientists. Mystery and science are opposite and complementary, and they are both considered to be knowledge systems for understanding everything in the universe.
Fortunately, the two did not delay the establishment of their emotional relationship too much during their studies. Everything happened naturally, including falling in love, getting married, and becoming a scientific research couple.
It is also very romantic to know each other and stay together, to be ordinary and busy without losing warmth and love, to join hands together and go on the road of exploring the truth of the universe.
But the dream hurriedly woke up, and the intimate connection and romantic charm between the two in the dream were also shattered by heavy real problems. Only a little tenderness remained. When Li Peifeng and Huang Tianxuan had breakfast after waking up, their eyes met.
, leaving insignificant traces.
What's even more pity is that several of the research results of the two in the dream, such as methods to obtain magic, special functions, or physical laws that have not been discovered in reality, have been lost due to different world rules or other unknown reasons.
Ended with failure.
Fortunately, Li Peifeng has deepened his understanding of other worlds due to his many dreams. This time, he did scientific research with Huang Tianxuan and practiced magic for more than ten years. It can be said that he can observe astronomy from above, geography from below, and communicate with all spirits in the middle.
Demonic energy, analysis of martial arts, sense of mystery, understanding of philosophy, engaging in science and technology... Exploring the principles of things in order to understand the principles of heaven in other worlds.
In short, after this dream communication, Li Peifeng gained a new understanding of the nature of other worlds, the laws of nature, and even all things. It was as if Wang Yangming gained enlightenment in Longchang, and Li Peifeng also gained enlightenment in his dream communication with Huang Tianxuan.
After waking up, Mr. Li completely understood how to write the book "Sword and Law". His literary thoughts were flowing, his thoughts were smooth, he wrote like a god, and he concentrated on writing without thinking about anything else.
He finished the first draft of 60,000 words in four days. On the fifth day, he revised it and deleted it to 50,000 words. When he felt satisfied, he sent it to his editor Xia Sheng...
"Huh~"
Half an hour later, Xia Shengyi was still planning to watch it for the third time. He looked at the time and realized that he had been delayed for too long. He slapped his forehead and sent the file directly to the male video editing group.
"(Pretend to be cool), Yiliangfeng's new book is finally out, please help me palm my eyes!"
(Editor-in-Chief of Group 2) Baodao: "It has come out after I have been calling for it for a long time. If you don't send it, I will forget it."
(Chief Editor of Group 6) Peanut: "Old rule? Two meals of He's official cuisine?"
(Chief Editor of Group 1) Lemon: “Add two bottles of Maotai.”
Xia Sheng snorted disdainfully and typed: "Watch it if you like it, or I'll withdraw it if you don't. I'll leak the manuscript of my master's new work for you to read first. It's good if you don't invite me to dinner!"
(Editor-in-Chief of Group 9) yy: "Oh, hey, stand up! What a wonderful write-up? I'll take a look and talk..."
These editors had just received it and could only comment after reading it. There was still a while, so Xia Sheng touched his chin and clicked on the document again, planning to read it a third time.
I sent the first draft of "Sword and Law" to those male channel editors, but I was not sure yet. I wanted to hear their comments. It would be best if I could point out some shortcomings, so that I could relay it to Li Peifeng and let them correct it.
The quality of the novel could be improved a bit.
Otherwise, Shengxia would feel that for such a great editor, it would be a bit embarrassing for him to tell his true feelings, like: "Fuck, it's so good, it's so shocking, it's so great!"
"Please Yiliangfeng, please write and post quickly. I have already prepared enough recommended resources for you!"
This chapter is not over yet, please click on the next page to continue reading! "Next chapter, send me the next chapter immediately, I want to read it!!"
Is that true? That’s not true!
That's right, the 50,000-word first draft of "Chronicle of the Sword and the Law" is surprisingly beautiful. Even though the outline is very polished, it doesn't affect the brilliance of the main text. It's even better.
The beginning of the story is very common, that is, the male protagonist in the real world often has a bizarre dream. The people and events in the dream are very real and absurd, but it does not affect his sleep and normal life. The male protagonist does not care, and even
Think of dreaming about traveling to other worlds as fun.
Until he woke up one morning, he found that he seemed to have really traveled to the world in his dream. The vast black sea in front of him was evidenced by the two stars above his head that were several times smaller than the sun. And he was facing the sun,
In a lone boat, with few supplies, alone, and nothing else.
The protagonist tried to return to the real world by sleeping, but failed. What was worse was that there were not many supplements left on the ship. Drifting in the sea, not knowing the direction of the land and islands, the protagonist could only recognize the reality and no longer have the illusion of returning.
Instead, he embarks on a "Robinson Crusoe"-style journey of survival on the sea in order to survive...
Life is threatened, survive.
This is the crisis that the protagonist encounters at the beginning of the novel. In the second chapter, the protagonist uses a few supplies on the boat to build a simple distillation facility to purify fresh water, make fishing rods, use fishing to ensure food, and improve the sailing ship.
The sail made the boat speed up. Although it was still impossible to tell which direction there was land, at least the speed was much faster.
These plots may seem boring, but with Li Peifeng's touching writing style, it is easy for readers to get involved in them and fluctuate with the protagonist's emotions.
More importantly, the various unheard-of magical creatures in the underworld, the magnificent celestial bodies in the sky of other worlds, and various anomalies that are different from the physical rules of the real world are all described in detail at the beginning.
Weird and realistic, magical and incredible.
A magical world that at least surpasses all magical literature in terms of authenticity is revealed through these little clues.
Li Peifeng interspersed many poems describing these wonders from other worlds in the text, and even posted several hand-drawn pictures to allow readers to be immersed in the scene and enhance the sense of weight or three-dimensionality of "Sword and Law".
Xia Sheng is certain that this will give readers the feeling of watching a 3D alien version of "Life of Pi", as the protagonist explores the world bit by bit.
The Underworld Sea is full of dangers. In order to survive, the protagonist not only has to distill pure water and fish every day, but also fight against unknown and ferocious marine creatures.
In Chapter 5, Li Peifeng arranged a life-and-death crisis for the protagonist. The protagonist relied on his previous dream experiences to feel the magic energy at the critical moment. He killed a strange fish that could jump out of the water and glide, awakened the golden finger, and was able to control
Thanks to the magical power of the wind, my sea survival journey has gone much smoother. I have also become friends with a cute sea creature that is slightly more intelligent and similar to a dolphin.
In Chapter 16, the protagonist, who has been wandering at sea for more than twenty times day and night, finally found an island. He was overjoyed and immediately landed, only to find intelligent creatures that were completely different from humans.
The first draft of 50,000 words also ends here...
(Chief Editor of Group 2) Baodao: "(angry) Damn it, where's the next chapter?"
(Editor-in-Chief of Team 6) Peanut: “I can’t do anything, I’ll be the first in chapter breaking!”
(Editor-in-chief of Group 7) December: "This chapter is too natural. You can't be polite to this kind of broken old dog. Lao Xia, tell me the address of Yiliangfeng!!!"
(Editor-in-Chief of Group 9) yy: "Do you still have any manuscripts in Midsummer? Send them over immediately, otherwise your computer will be destroyed!"
Shengxia: "(drops of sweat) It's gone. It's really gone. I'll urge you again!!"
This chapter has been completed!